line that stuff up / Comments

I feel like such a creeper, but you left this comment on a person's page that also commented on one of my poems trying to enforce christianity on me.
you said this on her page
"erm you commented on my religion poems about a month ago....you telling me you believe in god isnt going to make me believe ing od. So stop wasting your idea. I think religion is power hungry men who want control, and brainwash their followers to get what they want."
and I agree with this completely. thanks for saying something to her. (:

Well then thanks again. i read your about me.
"just shut up cause Im willing to die for you" that was my favourite part of it. i truly admire people who have the courage to speak their mind and guts.
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p.s: that was hands down thee sickest fucking comment anyone has left on my poems.<3
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hahaha rad as mate thanks for the comment!!! fucking LOVE YOU.
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Thank you for the comment:) and I won't argue with you there. This shouldn't be forced on a woman because that causes a whole lot of bad things to happen. But my poem was about the women that wear it willingly yet people still critisise them

hello...I read your comment on my profile and I respect you opinion..and I do not expect you to believe in God just because I do..you have you own free will...I know that you are right there are people who use religion as a means to use others for their own selfish and personal gain but please know that not all are like that from my experience there are those who live what they preach...I also read your profile from start to finish..I will not tell you that I know how you feel nor can I even begin to understand your pain...I do not understand why you hate religion though you dont have to tell me if you do not want to it is your own choice...farewell for now :)

Adult poets make poems that rhyme as well
like Langston Hughes
Maya Angelou
Robert Frost...
You dont have to be 13 and under to rhyme
I'm 15 and if you dont like my poem thats okay
but fine a better reason than the rhyme scheme

-Langston;;

Why thank you! :D

i actually dont mind critisizme or wuteva but wen u just blatently call it shit that hurts and fyi i was posting it for personall records not for ppl to read

actually i dont ONLY care about rhyming words i care about the meaning and message it put across to those whome read it as if it has no message to me it is a pretty pointless poem for i just see nothing to make the writer have a view on what they are writing and i truly do not think that poems are only ment for meaning ect.. because what is meaning? for all we no meaning could actually mean nothing at all as it has no evidance to back the word meaning up so that it has a meaning of being meaning <--- that makes secnce to me lol x

welcomes!

I bet. Glad to hear he is well.

Thank you for the comment :)

oooh go fuck your self i was not watching while i was writeing so fuck off

Yeah suure you do. Whatever I'm done with you, you're immature starting fights and shit.

Uhhhhh....yeah they do. Strait up will bust your ass, they test all the time and have full right. So that is taken out of your reasons on why you are better than me.

And I don't need to send you my whole past.

Straight up, you're an idiot and should not be telling people how much you need to quit but can't and don't want too. Stupid ass shit. DO IT ALREADY.

Oh fuck you. And you think they will test you once? Hahaha, no, bitch.

Damn, you are fucking stupid. I'll take it step by step, okay?
One, put the shit down. you're stupid enough.
Two, not once did I say you couldn't complain, by all means do so.
Three, I don't understand? Suure, thats what you think. I'm clean now because its call QUITING. Do you know that word? Do I need to hold your hand and read it outloud for you? Huh?
Four, military don't mean shit dumnfuck. Inorder to even get in you have to be clean, and well I don't see that happening.
Five, don't ever, I mean ever say that you are in anyway better than me.

Do you understand? Tell me if I'm going to fast for you, I'm sure your little mind can't 'handle' all these words at once. Fuck off, get a life and stop trying to get people to pay attention to you

You’re blowing shit out of your fake ass. You're a better person than me? Really? HA! I laugh, bitch. At least I'm real. Not some fucking poser who seeking attention posting journals about me 'oh so sad' life. How 'I'm such an addict and I don't want to stop'. Who are you fucking kidding? That’s stupid as shit, just like you and your whole life. Want to have cancer? Well here I'll shove some into your mind so you'll have something to complain about! HOLY MOTHER OF EARTH! You're an idiot, and just by writing this has dropped my IQ points down by two points. Thank you for that. And as for anyone else who thinks posting up doing drugs is so 'fun' you are fucking stupid too. This is why the world is going to shit. Because of little assholes like you. Drugs are fine, but posing it up for attention is just...fucking stupid to put it into worlds your little shriveled up brain would understand. Fucking pathetic, posting pictures of that shit. You're a dumbass, everyone who is friends are dumbasses too for even letting you do this like that. Fucking stupid. Selfish fucking bitch, go snort some more pixie sticks and get a real job then standing on the corner.

Sainthood; a state of sarcasm. I'm anything but a Saint.

I'm sorry honey, that's fine you don't give a fuck about my opinion, because I could careless if you O.D or not. Everyone was trying to help you, you just back talked us all.

Karma's a real bitch in the end.