I got a comment on my new poem "counting the heart beat"
Well I gotta say, you did make my eyes open. Or you made my writer block go away... :O but still thanks to you!
Well at least you didn`t have a life like that
You know, my friend used to smoke weed until she stopped and began to try another thing to keep her mind off of drugs. Trying eating sunflowers.
Hope you have a nice life, now that your not under your parents roof, and you`ve grown up:)
Your just lucky you werent rape
Your just lucky your friends didn`t try to drown you
Your just lucky that your mom wasnt too drunk that beats you up unil you were out cold
Your just lucky they only kick you out of the house
Your just lucky that the weapon wasn`t a gun or a kitchen knife
A addiction can stop by force or will power, its just tempting and your urge to.
You can call me a child if you want to, If that makes you feel better, but I don`t really care.
Yes I`m native, but that doesn`t mean I don`t know what people go through. How confusing life is for some people. How they just want to pain to wash away from themself, or try to get somethings to let out the painful memories. The addiction can stop, you know that right? Check 'That beautiful gothic girl' cause I think I found your fucking custom name. And if your already dead, why don`t you just kill youself again? It`s not like your that mentally dead.
Yupp you would think its cute.
Fuck off? Why don`t you when you keep on reading my poems.
And they have no fucking meaning? All you care about its the posion going into you, all you care about its death, all you care about is wanting to go though the easy way. Well then whats the fucking meaning to live if you act all shitty and bitchy. Why don`t you dig your own grave, bury yourself and die. Cause I bet it that doesn`t matter to you.
1.Do you not think about the main idea of the poem?
2.So if you knew right away you hated it why continue to read it?
3.And I didn`t think too highly of myself its called inner beauty its what everyone has, well almost.
4.Also the hair thing, it you read books they always describe the characters on there hair color and I`m describing to people what people always write on them
5.If i`m the bitch, then your the uglyass fucking whore=) I`m not going to let you insult me. I don`t even know you.
Yes, I do know that women had to fight for their rights.
I was told to write a poem "A World Without..."
I love history and I'm always annoyed at how women were treated so my friend jokingly told me to do A World Without Women's Rights.
Sad thing is that joke got be the better mark