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  • Lemon

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    welcomes :)
    December 26th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • Fi.

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    :D i wouldnt go that far till i find out what hes all about XD
    December 25th, 2009 at 09:04am
  • Annakuru;

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    Thanks for the comment on my poem! That's exactly what it's supposed to mean, haha. Stop saying maybe and actually Do something! Thanks again(:
    December 25th, 2009 at 06:12am
  • jay_boo

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    Well, each way could make you better:]

    I got a comment on my new poem "counting the heart beat"
    Well I gotta say, you did make my eyes open. Or you made my writer block go away... :O but still thanks to you!
    December 23rd, 2009 at 04:13am
  • jay_boo

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    O fuck really?
    wow
    Btw, do you feel better since you got the unwanted feelings out?
    December 23rd, 2009 at 04:08am
  • jay_boo

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    Okay fine it might not be weed
    But what about marijuana? =//
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:58am
  • jay_boo

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    no im serious
    she fucking smoke and drink(:
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:48am
  • jay_boo

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    Well at least you didn`t have a life like that
    You know, my friend used to smoke weed until she stopped and began to try another thing to keep her mind off of drugs. Trying eating sunflowers.
    Hope you have a nice life, now that your not under your parents roof, and you`ve grown up:)
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:39am
  • jay_boo

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    Your just lucky you werent rape
    Your just lucky your friends didn`t try to drown you
    Your just lucky that your mom wasnt too drunk that beats you up unil you were out cold
    Your just lucky they only kick you out of the house
    Your just lucky that the weapon wasn`t a gun or a kitchen knife
    A addiction can stop by force or will power, its just tempting and your urge to.
    You can call me a child if you want to, If that makes you feel better, but I don`t really care.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:19am
  • jay_boo

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    Yes I`m native, but that doesn`t mean I don`t know what people go through. How confusing life is for some people. How they just want to pain to wash away from themself, or try to get somethings to let out the painful memories. The addiction can stop, you know that right? Check 'That beautiful gothic girl' cause I think I found your fucking custom name. And if your already dead, why don`t you just kill youself again? It`s not like your that mentally dead.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 03:07am
  • jay_boo

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    Yupp you would think its cute.
    Fuck off? Why don`t you when you keep on reading my poems.
    And they have no fucking meaning? All you care about its the posion going into you, all you care about its death, all you care about is wanting to go though the easy way. Well then whats the fucking meaning to live if you act all shitty and bitchy. Why don`t you dig your own grave, bury yourself and die. Cause I bet it that doesn`t matter to you.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 02:59am
  • jay_boo

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    1.Do you not think about the main idea of the poem?
    2.So if you knew right away you hated it why continue to read it?
    3.And I didn`t think too highly of myself its called inner beauty its what everyone has, well almost.
    4.Also the hair thing, it you read books they always describe the characters on there hair color and I`m describing to people what people always write on them
    5.If i`m the bitch, then your the uglyass fucking whore=) I`m not going to let you insult me. I don`t even know you.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 02:45am
  • Jinxedestiny

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    What other poem have I deleted?
    I haven't deleted any of my poems.
    December 21st, 2009 at 07:41pm
  • Neverscreamcharlene!

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    oh. you should write mare. it was really good.
    December 19th, 2009 at 10:03pm
  • Neverscreamcharlene!

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    bleh. addiction scares me.
    holy crap...
    your You Don't Really Have to Breathe story is....










    a m a z i n g...
    December 19th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • Fi.

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    XD yes i suppose thats not a good idea. If you were where i am you would be a very happy camper. people offer you shit upfront. no joke
    December 19th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • Neverscreamcharlene!

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    i just dont like feeling like i have to do something.
    id rather be able to take it when i want. not when i feel like i need to.
    December 19th, 2009 at 01:00am
  • Jinxedestiny

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    Yes, I do know that women had to fight for their rights.
    I was told to write a poem "A World Without..."
    I love history and I'm always annoyed at how women were treated so my friend jokingly told me to do A World Without Women's Rights.
    Sad thing is that joke got be the better mark
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:30am
  • Neverscreamcharlene!

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    personally, i think meth sounds fucking cool. minus the addiction part...
    December 18th, 2009 at 04:08am
  • Neverscreamcharlene!

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    haha. wow
    what are you taking??
    December 18th, 2009 at 12:20am