Raging Eyeliner / Comments

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So hi.
Here I am, demanding an update.
You said you work well under pressure.
Well, I'm pressuring you.

Oh wow I didn't even notice you updated. That excites me. Glad to see you managed to find the transitional pieces that you needed to finish the update you were telling me about. I'll be off to read them as soon as I finish this comment. I'll probably have to go back to my Mibba subscriptions; I think I'm not getting the emails since your story probably went back to 'inactive'. Ugh, that annoys me.

Anyway, hope your holidays went well. Merry late Christmas, and hope your new year is starting off well.

Anya!

You need to start telling me when you update or something, love. Why don't I ever get the email for this story!? Off to read...

So, definately you updating was an early Christmas present. Hahah, it's sad that out of all the stories I have subscribed to, Excuse the Obscene is the one I look forward to seeing as an update e-mail. It was lovely and worth the wait... Can't wait for the next one doll. :)

Hahaha thanks for the info. No rush though. I'd rather you take your time and make it good, than to throw out some really badly written filler.

Plus, I don't really have the right to say anything. I haven't updated in over month myself. I just wanted to sort of nudge you, since I'm addicted to ETO. I know what you mean though. I'm working on a chapter right now that has the best beginning, and I've written out the ending too; I've just got a big blank page in the middle. It's pretty much exactly what you're experiencing lol. It's also pretty daunting, because you just stare at it hoping the perfect inspiration will strike to connect the two parts...
*fingers crossed*
Good luck to you!

Hey...so...I'm wondering in a completely non-nagging, pushy way...when you're going to be updating again...

I'm bored && I realized that I haven't talked to you in a while =)
How goes it, lady?
You okay?

Insanely long comments? Trust me, you've haven't seen anything yet =P LOL

But I don't mind too much. I tend to write a lot as well, so seeing long comments isn't daunting or annoying to me. Although I do know what you mean by the "annoying" comments on your stories. I see them all the time, and it's just frustrating. This site was designed to help authors improve their work, and they can only do so when people offer real, in-depth critiques on pieces. Too many times most just brush aside the whole idea of learning, thinking it's purely for recreaction; and to a certain extent I guess it is. But I'm glad you appreciate my long-winded ramblings on your stories. Sometimes I don't even know what the heck to write, especially with amazing pieces like that last one you wrote. Just magnificent.

So are you, if you truly consider yourself a work in progress. That takes incredible courage and maturity to fully implement a statement like that into your life; I applaude you. Actually, I call forth a marching band complete with baton swingers and the flag dancers! That's really impressive. I'm glad I could help, even if in just a tiny little bit.

I avoid Mibba a lot too. I'm often disappearing for extended periods of time. It's so addicting and distracting, which is horrible when you're in university and working. Plus, it's so easy just to get lost in the stories and totally forget about your own. It's happened to me a lot, and now I've forgotten all the ideas I originally had for mine; now it's on hiatus =[ lol. I guess it can't be helped though. I've just been writing one shots lately to try and get back into the grove of things.

So are you, by the sounds of it. Yay, Johnny confrontation for Toni! I've been dying for it. As lovely as the romance is, the story needs that balance of drama and violence, so I'm glad you're not throwing it all away to turn ETO into those awful teen romance novels lol. But make sure to take your time in writing the next bit; you don't want to push out an idea and then have nothing left. Take your time to make it good, and then as you're writing, perhaps more plot concepts will come to you.

I wis you the best of luck! Hopefully I'll be leaving insanely long comments on the next update, but if not don't be afraid to come spam me too.

It didn't sound pretentious at all.

I know exactly what you mean. I appreciate any comment but there comes a time when you're almost ready to beg for something more than 'fantastic' or 'cool'. Its good to hear something substantial about your work. Hell, I'd appreciate a lengthy insult lol.

Writing late at night does have its hazards; I do the same thing. You feel like you're being deep but you're just not sure if its crossed the line into oddly confusing. I usually just go with it.

But thank you for that. Its nice to be recognized and to know that my comments help.

boy, do i know what that's like.
changing layouts is fun dude.
wayy fun.

Hey pretty.
Lovin' the new layouttt and that picture!

Aha you're welcome, pretty much as soon as I read it I was like 'this is the winner'
A banner doesn't have to have people in it aha but it's alright all the same :)
And glad I inspired you to write a one shot ^_^

Thanks for the journal comment & I'm sorry. And no problem random rants are the best. :)

I did like the pov switching back and forth. It gave the story a .. different vibe. I've never really seen a story written that way before, so congrats dear. I loved it!

Nah, I like the fact that you're thinking of startiong up new stories. I'm excited! Just as long as ETO is still priority number one! And I really like the idea of posting all three summaries but what if we like all three? What if I end up liking two A LOT? Hmm. Are they fanfics? ZV? Brian? Tell mee!

Hey just to let you know, you can give in your entry whenever you want
I'm in halls of residence at University and the internet is being a bit weird, so I have it sometimes and other times I don't, so the whole month thing is provisional but if everyone hands it in before then, then I'll just judge it whenever I can get a chance, so yeah whenever you want :)

Hello lovie! How's the writing going? =)

Alas it is a month, which sucks :(
Anyways I've just spoken to her and she asked me to pass this on to you since:

"*Tell her thanks and to submit it anytime and that im hoping for a chapter of excuse the obscene whenever i get back."

:)

Just dropping by to let you know on behalf of my friend Kissing.Sin that due to an unforseen circumstance she has had to extend the deadline of her contest by another month or so till her internet is fixed :)

Hey girlie! No problem. I love your Zacky and Toni series. I'm just totally in love with story between the two of them. I'm not going to lie, it's totally got me thinking about mob stories myself...too bad school gets in the way. Thankfully I didn't fail that paper, but it was a close call haha. Reading your stories are addicting.
I always read author's notes. Even if the story is finished haha! I think it provides a lot of insight into the writer and their lives. It's especially inspiring to know that, even though their lives are insanely hectic, they're still trudging through to write. =] THat's me right now lol. School is kicking my ass. How've you been?

Hey, the contest is extended until the 7th, so you've got a little more time :)