Raging Eyeliner / Comments

Ay what you have been doing for 11 chapters is brewing the sexual tension. :) You created a ticking time bomb of Toni luurrrvee. Lol.

Hey, dude.


I <3 you.


Thought you should know... Teehee.

Hey thanks for entering :D
I was quite surprised aha
Your prompt - http://www.popartuk.com/g/l/lgph0291+new-york-taxi-number-1-new-york-usa-poster.jpg
Interpret however you want so, doesn't have to be a NY taxi cab per se, or about taxi's whatever you want within reason
And, well you have till Thursday then, unless the other girl doesn't give it in by then and it'll get extended like a week or something
So good luck :)
Btw, if you want your prompt changed just ask

I couldn't have stopped if I wanted to lol. Its become such a rarity that I find a story that doesn't make me wish for the time I'd lost by the second chapter. You're a great writer and I look forward to more.

I was so shocked to see an update already! It was massively exciting. Haha, I'm glad they're back together-ish now, it's about time!! Hahah, so siked to see the twists and turns you have brewing in your head, this is easily my favorite story. xo. -Kelly

Are you serious? Dude. That's so very exciting! Now, you've got me even more impatient! So, Val wasn't intentionally the voice of the readers? Wow... =)

Aha awesome :D
Toni and Zack are completely perfect for each other I swear XD
Lots of amazing sex etc

I got so excited when I saw the update email, it was a bit ridiculous. Haha. But anyway, it was amazing as always dear. xo. Kelly

lol Yay! That makes me a happy kiddie. And I'm glad I reminded you to write! Oh and I like the fact that you're aiming to update before another one month mark =) Makes me proud lol

I'm not here to bug you for an update yet, but I just realized something. I really wanna see Toni and Zacky being cute. And couple-y. So I have a request.

Can you make them be all cute and couple-y [i]once[/i] before the story is done? Please?

(That is, if they ever get together lol.) It can be Zacky being protective or them talking about their future or something. I'd love to see it though. I think it'd be cute. It'd show that they're not completely angry-raw-passionate people lol. It's just a request. Obviously you don't have to do it! teehee.

Hey it's ok. That happens to me too. I'm kinda dragging my feet to update my story atm but I'm working on another one, so that might make some people happy. Especially A7x readers. Lol

Tell me about it. That happens when I write too. But, I did like the chapter:)

Im from London
glad your having fun and what sights have you seen?

The readers who stop reading...well its their loss really, isnt it.
and i like re-read First you Fall cause its that amazing
:)

I read it and I commented too! Go check that out.

What the hell? When did you get to London? Whoaa. Hope you're having a blast. And the fact that you actually found time to write, makes me appreciate the damn chapter even more. =)

Aw, you're welcome doll!

I'm getting ready to read it now.. I'm excited. It should be epic!

lol Fingers crossed then!
I shall wait like a good little girl =)
How exciting!

Absolutely love First You Fall and Excuse The Obscene... I'm addicted. I can't wait for an update!!

Update the damn story, woman!
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I love your story Excuse the Obscene and the prequel. I just read them both today, and subscribed to the sequel, and was going to comment, but my comments have been fucked up for a couple months so I can't comment on stories. But just wanted to drop by and let you know that I loved it! =]:

I am so very glad to hear that you haven't even thought about ending the story yet! You've made me very happy! =D