Raging Eyeliner / Comments

Less hostile shows progress. And progress brings Zack and Toni a little closer. I honestly hope you don't end the story right when they get back together. They need to kick some ass together! Though I don't know when that'll happen, I'm positive it will. It'd be awesome to see them get in a fight over killing a dude... What a typical couple, huh?

A cake?

You got distracted by a cake? lmao.

Soooo you don't [i]really[/i] have 5 chapters? =( Meh. It's okay. You have something. I'm happy about that. And I get where you're coming from. I'll be patient. You go ahead and figure out where the hell you're going with the story =) I'm excited though.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next one though.. If Toni is going to be less hostile (I hope so!) and if Zacky is gonna be all cute with her again... If he's gonna be all protective when she goes out and does jobs for him... So very excited.

I already miss the story! I hope you have more than a paragraph!?
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I hope you get your damn groove back, then!

AJ<3

Well yes I realised :D
And I hope Toni does realise :/
She's the only person in the world to like..have that much power over Zacky
Zack should get kidnapped rofl, maybe Toni would realise how much she really loved him or somet :/
Yeah imagination going wild lol

We're psychic! Nice! Loved it, commented on it, squealing my freezing Canadian butt off for more! Now go read my comment!
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lol
You'll get it and it'll be amazing. All you need is some inspiration, yeah? Give it time and I'll try to do the same =D

Lmao oh jeez. I'm having the same problem. The words just refuse to leave your mind, even though you have such awesome content. Sucks. I'm satisfied that you're trying though! If I remember correctly, you should have more than half a page done right?

I'm writing a new story called you'll never go too far.
It's a nonfanfic story so I hope you check it out and give me feed back.
Thanks.

Guess what I did!

I shamelessly promoted you! And now you, FYF and ETO are linked in the author's note for my Avenged fanfic. (Chapter 4) =D

I told you I'd do it! Ain't I something?

Ohhh. Half is good. It's certainly better than the one lone sentence you had the other day lol

And I'd like to think I'm your most avid reader too. It better stay that way! lol It will. I promise to comment on anything and everything!

Oh dude, I forgot to tell you. At the beginning of chapter 6, I was sort of confused when Toni was checking Drew's injuries. I wasn't sure if she did that before or after Zacky's outburst. (Of course that got cleared up, later on.) I would've loved to see Toni's reaction, though. What did she think of Zacky's sudden act of violence? Dunno if you even want to make the change, I just thought I'd let you know =D

No, no, no! You did it right! We're in the same timezone, I think. But I just couldn't wrap my head around the fact that that's why you updated. It made me feel special. So thank you, darling!

Now go read my comment =D

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!


Did I read that wrong? Or did you just tell me that you updated because it was my mibba anniversary? Either way, I love you!!!!!!!! Even more now, because you updated =D

Hahaha! That is what Zacky gets for being such an ass! A nice whooping and a green case of jealousy. :D Amazing chapter. Seriously! When do you plan on updating again?

Is you going to update soon? Excuse the obscene... I want to know what happens lol

Well....Two sentences isn't [i]too[/i] bad. It's more than I have at the moment. Writer's block sucks. Is that what you have or is it something else?

You have absolutely no idea how happy that makes me.


And your computer dilemma sucks. Seriously. But I think you know that already haha. If I knew you in person, I'd probably buy you a new computer. Gah, What about your mom's computer? I thought you used that one too...

Hello. I've been reading your story 'Excuse The Obscene' and it is amazing. I adore it so much. The plot line is amazing. It is very well written. I've read it so many times. I was wondering if you knew, or if you could pin point, when the next chapter is going to be out. I can't seem to get enough of it.
I'm Samantha by the way.
:)

Hey!

I just wanted to say that I am loving both of your stories! I've been waiting (rather impatiently might I add) for an update...it may or may not have become a small obsession of mine

:)

Why wouldn't they!? Your first story left us hanging!!! Of course we would all come back and read the sequel!!! :DDD