I just posted my third chapter, it's kind of just build up for the next chapter, so it's not as long as the other chapters, but it's there whenever you want to read it
Thanks, I'll try to pay attention to what you did in the first chapter to improve my grammar problems.
Now I only have one more question and it's only because someone else told me about it, so far who is your favorite character?
The last girl told me Dante, I never even thought that much about the characters before, I was worried about the story line, but now I'm trying to put more detail about off their personalities
Haha I wrote "For you" for my friend Josh, and then "Your music" for my Mexican friend *-*
I'm not feeling poetic today, but I will write you a poem XD I really will haha. But I think I have to get to know you better first D:
My second chapter is out, if you want to read it, tell me what you think, also can you tell me if I did any better with the spelling and the grammar too?
With me.. One of my friends wrote me a poem.. So I said I would write him a poem, too. And thus I wrote the poem "For you." And then, I wrote another poem for someone else. So it makes it easier to write poems for people. :D Gives me more of a reason to write xD
Aw thanks :)
I've gotten to where.. if I have an idea for something.. I can force myself to write it down in a notebook xD Which is a pretty good start, eh? haha
lol! I mostly write about romantic realistic things! I'm writing this story and it's about this girl who meets this gangster! I wont say it corny lovey dovey but its about love. Anyways, I'm Raquel, nice to meet you! And what do you write?!