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  • Just that Girl

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    Hey I'm Shannon :)
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • like clockwork.

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    Not always a bad thing :D But.. sometimes you kind of end up destroying the first poem ._.
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Black Amethyst

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    I'm working on my second chapter, this is where things get a little bit more interesting
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Black Amethyst

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    I read it and it still sounds great to me.
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:38am
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    It's excellent :) And yeah, I understand. Sometimes I'll go to revise a poem and end up with a completely different poem, new meaning and all. <.>
    July 29th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • Black Amethyst

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    OK I still think it's good but I think that you might have just been looking for things that rhyme with the word night.
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • Black Amethyst

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    OK I'll look again then
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:48am
  • Black Amethyst

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    You know actually I can't find it, did you delete it or something?
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:37am
  • Black Amethyst

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    Well to the best of my knowledge I thought it was pretty good, but I'll read that part one more time and get back to you.
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • Black Amethyst

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    Kind of like death note
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:31am
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    Oh so that's what it is, but I just got done reading your story, it's actually very good it has a lot of detail in it, is this and original fiction? If so then you came up with a good story line.
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:26am
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    Not yet but I'm about to, I've been asleep mostly all day, i read the summary though and it sounds pretty interesting, what's a lich?
    July 29th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • like clockwork.

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    Hahaha Yes, that did make me laugh a little. Thanks for informing me of your revisions to The Stalker. ;P
    July 28th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • cosmicanparo

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    Aww yeah it'ss time to party! lol and class? Aern't you on vacat
    ion? It's summer.
    July 28th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • cosmicanparo

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    Thanks, Sweetie.c: lol. You seem pweety cool yourself. I'm Amparo. What'ss up?
    July 28th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • belaruska

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    Welcome to Mibba (:
    July 28th, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • like clockwork.

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    Haha Even unrevised your poems are some of the best I've read on Mibba ._. Although, I must admit, I don't read many. And I also must admit that I'm tired of poems that just yell "My life sucks" throughout the whole piece. I enjoy sad poems that highlight things wrong with a person's life, struggles, problems in the world, etc., but many are just about cutting/suicide. Can't say I like them as much. Favorite poet is Pablo Neruda ^-^. And thanks for the poem comment :D I wrote that poem in the car.. on the way home from church last Sunday. xD Anyways, yes, you should go through and revise your poems to your liking. And then tell me so I can read them. :3
    July 28th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • Black Amethyst

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    I just got done reading this story called Jin by this dude named Infernal Lord313 and it's pretty interesting so if you want you can go read it
    July 28th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • emma xcx

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    Welcome to Mibba, person. I'm Emmaline. =)
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:00pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey...what's up?
    Nice to meet you, i'm Maria by the way! :-)
    I'm here to welcome you, so welcome to the creative world of Mibbs! :DDD
    Feel free to ask anything you want! :-)
    July 28th, 2011 at 12:07pm
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