Dreamer5009 / Comments

Btw what kind of story are you planning on posting, just asking, but if I don't reply it's because I've gone to bed, which I should have done and hour ago

thanks I'll keep that in mind for the next chapter I write, but other than that, was everything else just fine or was there something else?

It's kind of like in real life like how some people have solid wood doors ans some of them have steel doors but actually I was talking about like a thick screen door with the bars on it, well at least I think they're made of steel, do you think I should have mentioned that

wow that is basically what I think of our country, i mean how are we in so much debt but spending money on all of these wars that have nothing to do with us? and we were about to get rid of our government, it was something about a budget and that if they couldn't decided by a certain time then the government would be disbanded and a new one would be established after a while but then they pulled together for a budget and now their having the same problems again

I am so sorry if this annoys you, but as for like the story line itself like the whole plot what went on the characters, what did you think of that is there something you didn't like is there something you think could have made it better, I just want to know so I can make it better as I start to write more and more chapters

Cool tell me when you post it so I can read it, I've been meaning to find a story on here to read anyway

OK I fixed it

That would be nice, and I just realized that I forgot the change Isis's name on the character list, on the list I still have her first name as Tala

I just want to be able to live by myself with no one telling me what to do, like currently my mom lives with hers until she can get her own place and she's a neat freak, i mean it, if she finds one wrinkle in you bed sheets when you make it, the room can be spotless and she'll tell you that you left it a mess, if you take a bath and clean out the tub but leave water in the tub like how the tub is wet after you clean it, and you don't dry it out, you left that tub a mess in her eyes

so how hard is it, i mean my sister is in collage and she says it's not hard but she's always had straight A's and like went to some good schools with qualified teacher, plus she's always loved school anyway, she's my step -sister but her dad has been with my mom since I was 3 so I call her my sister, I see her a lot more than my actual sisters anyway

Yeah at first I just wanted to go to collage and get a good job because my mom always did everything she could to give us what we wanted and needed so I wanted to get a good job so I could give her everything she wanted but never got to have, but she told me that it was my life and she couldn't live it for me, she said that needed to do what I had to do to do what I want to do, so when I finally get that job I'll still buy her some nice Christmas gifts but I'm also going to live my life too

Oh there is no question that I'm going to collage, I decided that for sure when I reached the 6th grade all the other time I was just kind of like, yeah well maybe, but not anymore

I need to because my job that I'm really thinking about going for is a writer, I enjoy doing it so why not, I thought about cartoonist, because I can can draw some amazing pictures, I only say so because I've been told by people I don't even know, I thought about making video games or becoming lawyer actually I haven't decided yet, I'm leaning more towards writer and that's the problem

yeah sorry, most of the schools I went to the teachers weren't really qualified to teach, so by the time I actually got some real teacher that new what they were doing they were in my last 4 years of high school and now I'm about to graduate and I don't even know where everything is supposed to go

OK thank you so much for that, you're really nice

Yes thank you that would be so helpful

thanks I already know I'm not good with grammar like where the commas go and all that, but I'm working on it and I also use the spell-check on my computer, but there were still things spelled wrong?

You don't have to rush, whenever you fell like reading it, I just need to know how I did on it, it's my first story and I want to make it good

Thanks, but in other news, what's up

Oh its good =)