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Sis! I tagged ya in this blog! So, go ahead and finish it up! (:

@ swarek.
Hey, thanks for explaining. I'm glad you liked my comments.

For Ch.5. It makes sense what you're saying, but I still have to say that it looks bad. If anyone happened upon them I don't think they care what their intent was when they did that, they'd just assume the worst. I'm just saying that most people think a little more about what they do, especially as adults. Like I don't see it as natural at all that they would ever be that comfortable around each other, he's still a guy and she's still a girl. But my beliefs around modesty are at total odds with the dominant ideologies in media and culture nowadays so I'll leave it at that.

Yeah I know about the order, I had to keep going back to the main page to see what year they were in....haha.

I know what you mean, I tried re-writing an old story I had, but stopped halfway. Too painful. Anyways thanks for your comment :)

Take care!

Hey there, so I've been reading the comments that you've been leaving on my work (thank you for that, by the way) and figured that it would be easier to address them all in a comment here.

Concerning The Universe, it has all been pre-written and my intent was to write in a simple way - without too much detail or dialogue, so that the reader themselves could experience a story that was individual to them, do you know what I mean? You might also notice that I never actually address either character by name - completely intentional :)

For Love Me Tonight, it is written as a fanfiction. So the first chapter isn't a real article, but I'm glad that you thought it could be! I had a bit of difficulty writing it!

Ahem, now onto The Dream Isn't Done, which I know you had a few questions on haha. I should point out that I wrote that YEARS ago. I think it's been around three years now. And nothing has been edited. At all. So if you stumble across discrepancies (such as the coffee/cocoa thing), it has everything to do with the fact that I haven't edited anything lol. I've tried to do it a few times, but I always seem to get distracted.

As for Chapter 5, which I know you had a lot to say on. The only thing I can say to that is that people don't always say things that they wholeheartedly believe in. Sometimes they just need an excuse. Which I hope will make more sense in later chapters. To add to that, stripping down to their underwear wasn't done with sexual intent, it was more of a "holy-crap-it's-so-humid-i-need-to-cool-down" type of way. I was also trying to show their comfort with each other (at least, I thought I was!).

Also, I'm not sure if you've picked up on this, but the chapters are not written in chronological order. I also feel the need to reiterate that I wrote this a long time ago. Reading it now makes me cringe a little. If I were to write this now, I would do things differently - explain things better, etc. I hope this gave you some satisfaction!

@ discoveringclouds
:(((((((((((((((((((( Not yet sis. But hopefully will be! This year. :)
And you becoming a full time author would be awesome :))
And hopefully I'll return to writing soon as well.

@ Tipsy Returns

Aww you sweetheart (in your own interesting way-getting mad at me! hahahaha). I'm doing well, just working and thinking about rejoining school one day. It's an interesting world out here, this workforce place. :)

Maybe, if I'm fortunate, someone will read my stories and hire me and I can become a full time author!

I want to write more, that's how I am. I have started thinking that I should write more and edit a lot more than I have been.

How's school going, you're in college now right?

@ discoveringclouds
And I was gonna say...sis have you forhotten me or something? You don't miss me at all right? And I was going to thow a tantrum as well...haha *sigh*
I will read it sis! But right now...I'm just too busy! And I've missed you like hell too. How are you?? :D

@ Tipsy Returns
Hi little sister! How are you?
After this many months all I get is a Hi! I demand a more substantial message from you. I miss you missy! I was just remembering you yesterday!

I also updated Princess Anna, tell me your thoughts!!!

Sis!! Hi!! :D

I get exactly what you mean. You said it better than I probably ever could.

@ DarkHeartedAngel
Yeah even in your signature it's so beautiful how you put it. How can a man touch a beautiful woman when he knows she will never be his. It's kind of horrifying sometimes to think (if I really think deeply) that there are fewer people getting married and more broken hearts. Relationships are all about love (somehow that is read as lust) and appreciation and loyalty is so important but it is lost when the waters get tough. Also since people don't commit more of themselves by getting married they end up with these temporary bonds that they give permanent deep feelings to. I just wish more people would give feelings where they are due. Permanent relationships should have more permanent deep feelings like family and spouses and children and temporary relationships like work and strangers shouldn't be given everything. You know what I mean?

Thanks for the comment on Whispers in the Dark! It is sad that it happens so much these days.

@ Ninja Nourie
Awww thank you kindly. :) I hope you do read the rest! I'm trying to work on something interesting happening next!

It's truly wonderful, though I'll shamefully admit I haven't kept up with it since I last read it as I thought it was finished. Don't fret, though, I'll be sure to pick up where I left off! The story is too beautiful to not continue with.

Yes it does, but it depends on how creative I feel :)

@ Average Lifesaver;;
Yeah that's probably it ;) hahaha.

You're welcome!! I hope you enjoy it, I just read it again after I told you about it. :D

@ discoveringclouds
Haha, not me. My license is Y298035908 or something, haha. I definitely don't know it, haha. Maybe someone was totally inspired by my story (;

I'll definitely check it out! Thank you so much for the recommendation! Gotta love wolves :3

@ Average Lifesaver;;
Well my friend let tell you that today I saw a plate that said WOLFHOWL and I remembered you... Perhaps you were driving on the highway today? Hmm?

Anyways ;) the story is about AB an alpha blood wolf and AE who is suddenly captured into a world of history and destiny. There is drama and excitement, the good kind, and family values and purpose and friendship and fun. Without giving anything away I would say I'm definetly planning to read it again. It's a story that makes me think.

Here's the link if you like. :)

http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/509767/Blood-Red-Snow-White/

Yeah, he's not all bad!

Thanks! It's funny everyone points out the lack of detail, and it doesn't feel much different than how I usually write. Maybe I just eschew detail, haha.

I haven't! What's it about?

@ Average Lifesaver;;
Yay spoilers!! I had a feeling he wasn't evil, after all Oliver didn't poison/zap her at his first chance.

Lol I really like your story nonetheless! It makes me think, how can I write a story without excessive detail. It's really hard!! But good job! :D

Have you red xxbeautifulheartxx's story red as blood?

Well witch boy can't be that bad, seeing as he doesn't really know he's a witch right now! I guess I just gave you a spoiler. It's the inside scoop, haha. And wizard felt a little too weird for him, so he's just witch boy. Or Oliver.

What wolf story?? Oooh! And, I don't really know what I'm going to do, haha. So that's probably why you can't guess.

Haha, I'd love to!

@ Average Lifesaver;;
Btw your comment is hilarious and this might be my way of reminding you... That your story isn't really blah.. And should continue. Btw it's really weird to call a boy a witch isn't it? But I don't really care because either way people who use magic are EVIL!

*hides and does prayers of protection*

Like you may think I'm exaggerating... Which I am, but seriously I actually say prayers of protection in my heart when I read about witch boy. It's really freaky.

Wolves though, I'm okay with. I write fan fiction about a wolf story I read. I could do the same to you but your thoughts are too tight and I can't guess what you're going to do... Like ever.

Btw.. If you check out one of my stories some time that would be great because then I can show you blah. Mwahahha*coughs awkwardly and walks away*

Kthxbhai