astroz0mbie / Comments

I noticed you used the word "morrow" in Wonderwall... can't recall which chapter. I loved the rest of the line, but "morrow" sounded a little stilted. I think you should remove it, it sounds unnatural nowadays.

I write one-shots too. I divide them into chapters because it's easier. I mean, look at my paragraphs... If I had all that in ONE chapter, people'd freak.

How is Jess-eh?

He is tipsy. To say the least. Just like all the great writers, William Faulkner, James Joyce, etc etc.

You're cool then

I love your, "When We Were Young" Story, It's amazing

No?

Press on. You're too young to be overwhelmed.

Hey there. I love your profile, as well as "The taste of Roses".

Keep up the good work :P!

Let me put it this way. When it seems like you're surrounded by people who hate your writing: that's when you're in the best position you could hope for as a writer.

Well then remember this: all criticism will help you better understand your readership, and thereby make you a better writer. It hurts when people don't like your stories, but think less about the hurt, and more about WHAT drove that reader away. Learn from the experience; help it shape your understanding of what a reader needs to better appreciate your writing.

The majority of the population?

You mean here?

If you mean here, let me tell you, the majority of the population should be bowing down to your writing, and the fact that they're not just proves that they should be.

Like your pro

You are insanely talented.

Don't let that go to your head; you still need to hone your skills to be great, but you're definitely on the path to greatness. It's heartening to see someone so young with such a great affinity for writing, and I think, if you take a few creative fiction classes and participate in some live peer-review groups, you could take that prodigous style of yours and actually write some stories for big-time publication.

Jess!

It's you!

-is beyond happy-

How are you?

we have the same name! ^_^

i've been loads of things on there... Generation Terrorist, xAnarchy4theUSAx, Watoosh!, Mellon*Collie, billiejoegoat...

Yea, check them out and tell me what you think (=
<3Lonna

Yea I know what you mean (=
<3Lonna

I saw your post about you hate seeing MCR stories on mibba...I know what you mean but it wouldn't hurt to write one (= That's all I write is originals. You should check it out.
<3Lonna