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  • Dreamer399

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    Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! What are you waiting for?
    October 22nd, 2008 at 08:08pm
  • NATALiEpwins

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    sequel? hmm.. OFCOURSE! ;O omg, your stories the one i look most forward to reading, CONTINUE! ;O lmao, gah might i add that ur an amazing writer ;O i sound like a suck up douche lmao, BUT ANYWAYS adios ;) Natalie x
    October 21st, 2008 at 12:12pm
  • cleopatras_sin

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    yesssss! i want a sequel!!! :D
    awesome story.
    very.very.awesome. :P

    MAKE MAX GO AFTER HER IN PARIS!!
    or or, does he still work for the news paper?? make him have a mission to GO TO PARIS, and visit this one school, which HAPPENS to be where his "love" is at! :D

    haha
    October 21st, 2008 at 11:24am
  • ModernAngelxX

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    Okay, okay, okay. So 'Dirty Journalism' is finished and you asked the question: "Do you want a sequel?" - NO SHIT, YES. YES, I WANT A SEQUEL! I WANT MORE...

    Lots of love, Christy
    October 21st, 2008 at 12:16am
  • MusicConvoy

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    I actually got the email this time! So apparently last time was just a glitch or something.
    Are you really ending it in the next chapter?
    Are you going to start on a new story after Dirty Journalism is finished?
    October 19th, 2008 at 06:25pm
  • Heaven's Devil

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    Wow, I just read your story and it is amazing! I love it so much and I just wanted to let you know you are an amazing writer. I love it to bits and.....oh god, I don't know what else to say. It's just awesome and i love you for writing it <3
    October 19th, 2008 at 03:40am
  • Dreamer399

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    Wow. That's all I can think of typing. Wow. I'll type again, only backwards. Wow.
    October 18th, 2008 at 10:09am
  • MusicConvoy

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    Well, I guess we are both cluelessly stuck in the dark about the whole star-rating thing. Oh well...
    October 18th, 2008 at 01:44am
  • MusicConvoy

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    I just realized that I didn't read the last chapter you put up! Something apparently is screwed up on my computer.
    Are you really going to pull Jackie out of school? What about Max or Stella, or Lexi?! (But especially Max!) I can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully i'll actually get an email this time for it!)
    October 18th, 2008 at 01:39am
  • MusicConvoy

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    Thanks for the comment. (By the way, there'll probably be another chapter up tomorrow).
    I have a question to ask you. I feel kind of stupid, but... do you know how people rate your stories? I mean when you put then up it says if it has any stars or anything, but I don't know how you get them...
    Oh, Ps. Dirty Journalism's last couple of updates have been awesome, keep it up!
    October 18th, 2008 at 01:25am
  • cleopatras_sin

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    woah dude!
    MAKE HER GO BACK TO SCHOOL PLEASE? :( poor max. he turned out to be GREAT!

    I love your story. it's effin awesome. keep up the good work =)
    October 15th, 2008 at 01:22pm
  • cleopatras_sin

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    nice update! :)
    October 13th, 2008 at 01:37pm
  • cleopatras_sin

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    really.
    awesome story!
    love it =)
    xoxo
    October 12th, 2008 at 06:30am
  • MusicConvoy

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    aww, i feel kinda bad i got you hooked on them and none of them are working out for you!
    to tell you the truth i'm stuck on them too, i have a couple sent to my email daily
    October 8th, 2008 at 11:57pm
  • MusicConvoy

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    Well, thank you then
    October 1st, 2008 at 07:31pm
  • MusicConvoy

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    That was so nice of you! When i mentioned my other story i didn't mean that you HAD to read it or anything, but thank you. & i'm glad i got the brother-sister thing right (I only have a sister, but that's what i think my brother would be like if i had one).
    September 30th, 2008 at 09:55pm
  • MusicConvoy

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    That's so odd, I love greek mythology too! I mean I like pretty much every kind of mythology, but i've always loved all of the greek ones the most. I'm glad you like the expressions, some of them take forever to think of- so if you think of any i could put them in the story too!

    I totally get what you're saying with the writing too, I mean with Home of the heroes, it was just too strong an image in my head, so i kind of had to write it, even if no one read it. So i glad some people actually did-and apparently liked it! My other story i put up, well... no one's even read after the first chapter. But i really like that one too, so i don't know if i'll just keep adding to it, of if i'll focus on Hoth (Home of the Heroes) for a while instead of splitting my writing into the 2 stories
    September 29th, 2008 at 10:25pm
  • MusicConvoy

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    First off I just wanted to thank you for the comment on my story (Home of the Heroes) It means alot because I haven't really gotten a lot of feedback or anything from my storie and I'm not that confident in my writing. So thanks.

    Isn't it wierd that your story is like my favourite one that I'm reading and that you like mine too?... Okay I guess it's not really that wierd, it's just kind of a funny coincidence.

    Anyways I really just wanted to say thanks for the support, I appreciate it.
    September 28th, 2008 at 06:27pm
  • destroy.better

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    it is good. its a nice twist from the average i hate you plot. i have one story like it on. but i think your is better than mine. more organised better skill..don't be insecure. its good.
    September 21st, 2008 at 05:51pm
  • destroy.better

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    hope you got it..and im fine ..your welcome but i like your writing style!
    September 20th, 2008 at 12:22am