NCIS: Jethro's Secret - Comments

Kerplunk Girl:

Y'know. You could make some serious money if you were a story writer or script writer for the show. Just so y'know. 8)
Coz you're good at writing these types of plots.

You can't even imagine how HAPPY I was when I read that (: I was smiling from ear to ear, jumping around Dujo (: We were both so haaaaaaaaaaaappy (:

It means a lot. OMG!

I smile every time I read it (:

Y'know. You could make some serious money if you were a story writer or script writer for the show. Just so y'know. 8)
Coz you're good at writing these types of plots.

I agree with Sara on the lip thing. Awesome!

“…cannot wait to see the look on your face when Gibbs’s anger mixed with low/high caffeine mood swings grind you down!”
^^ I sure hope so.

Bastard Son.:

'Kay then.

I like the sounds of that and I loved the update. There's the suspense again. :shock: But DiNozzo seriously cracks me up. And nice touch with that cut on his lip starting to bleed again as he smiled. It made the whole situation even more realistic.

*jumps around*

I'm trying. Hard. To make it look like an episode. One true. Yet original episode. XD

And when you say that he cracks you up... I guess it means that I managed to go deep and deep, inside the characters themselves. I mean (take 2), I make them say what I think they will say playing in the NCIS show. Ahem. I'm confuzed.

'Kay then.

I like the sounds of that and I loved the update. There's the suspense again. :shock: But DiNozzo seriously cracks me up. And nice touch with that cut on his lip starting to bleed again as he smiled. It made the whole situation even more realistic.

Bastard Son.:

Abby. Can we have more of Abby in the future? XD

Oh, and you liked this face :shock: , right? XD Morgue.

I'll try to gather some strength for a real comment soon, I promise.

I like your comments no matter how big they are XD Yeah, we'll have more of Abby in the future, as a matter of fact, she'll have a huge role in the end :tehe:

P.S: I like that face 8)

Abby. Can we have more of Abby in the future? XD

Oh, and you liked this face :shock: , right? XD Morgue.

I'll try to gather some strength for a real comment soon, I promise.

It's nice to hear that (: It makes me want to update it every minute :D

GO ABBY!!!!
(She's my favourite)
I' lovin this story more and more every time you update 8)

Sherlock:

^^^Boy, you're ambitious! And now you're scaring me...

If you keep ending chapters when the scene's at it's peak, you're gonna succeed. Don't keep in suspense for too long, though.
And I love it how you keep using the syntagme bastard son

Suspense chapters are over, I think. No, actually, the following ones are less tense (: I'll try to end chapters at their peaks, thanks for the suggestion. And advice 8) Bastard son is the coolest "insult" :D

^^^Boy, you're ambitious! And now you're scaring me...

If you keep ending chapters when the scene's at it's peak, you're gonna succeed. Don't keep in suspense for too long, though.
And I love it how you keep using the syntagme bastard son

Man, thank you, man (:

I loved that shocking face of yours. I mean, I love that smiley (: I just wanna be good at making people wonder what it will be, I wanna be a master of suspense LOL. OK, scratch that.

Thank you so much <33333

:shock:
Man.

This was great. And DiNozzo's sense of humor is hilarious.
I love the suspense.

Sherlock:

HAHAH.
John Nettles is an actor who plays Chief Barnaby in Midsomer murders, one of my favourite series.

I see you're still keeping it tense. I love it!
And Gibbs' vocabulary remark ->

OMG, I didn't know that (: I used to watch Midsomer Murders but then lost the track (:

I'm trying to keep it tense, in NCIS style but original. I'm trying to make it all look like the true NCIS episode (: If I manage to do that, I'll be proud of myself :D

HAHAH.
John Nettles is an actor who plays Chief Barnaby in Midsomer murders, one of my favourite series.

I see you're still keeping it tense. I love it!
And Gibbs' vocabulary remark ->

Bastard Son.:

:lmfao Bastard son.

Oh, I'm intrigued. Loved the atmosphere of the chapter.
And I'm not sure whether Gibbs will smack Tony on the back of the head for not bringing him coffee and allowing himself getting kidnapped, or if he'll just save him, be happy for him and then smack him.

It's far away from an end (: All I can say and guarantee is that it will end in NCIS-ish style (:

And yeah, Bastard Son is for you *giggles to self*

Vimto-skittles-YAY!!:

Woo NCIS Story
I love this show (so much i started a thread as you know)
I love this story i know people have already quoted it but He knew that talking to Gibbs on a low caffeine level was equal to making out with a transvestite.
That reminded me of that epiode were he did make out with a tranvestite
=]
I've subscribed i love it

Thank you very much (:
Yeah, I know it reminds you of that episode, I made it on purpose. I like adding snippets from previous episodes. As I want it to be the real NCIS story, I gotta do what they do (:

:lmfao Bastard son.

Oh, I'm intrigued. Loved the atmosphere of the chapter.
And I'm not sure whether Gibbs will smack Tony on the back of the head for not bringing him coffee and allowing himself getting kidnapped, or if he'll just save him, be happy for him and then smack him.

Woo NCIS Story
I love this show (so much i started a thread as you know)
I love this story i know people have already quoted it but He knew that talking to Gibbs on a low caffeine level was equal to making out with a transvestite.
That reminded me of that epiode were he did make out with a tranvestite
=]
I've subscribed i love it

Sherlock:

Ooh. Someone got out of bed on the wrong side. :|
You're keeping it thrilling. Good job.

I LOVE the Monkeys' lyrics in the chapter description section. They're so cool :cheese:

I'm trying (: I'm trying to mix drama, suspense and humour at the same time (: I pause for a second and think: "What'd Gibbs say? What'd DiNozzo say?" I think I'm losing my mind :D And that mysterious man... (: