This story has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read. No lie. Stories based in older eras have always fascinated me. You officially have another dedicated reader<3
those wind/ghost/whisper voices are creepy. but ever so curious. i want ot know more! AND im super-dee-dooper to hear what charles has to say and what the letter says!!!! :D
also, "Maybe it was stranger that I was more concerned with my matrimonial future than a future without my future" was that last future supposed ot be father? because i replaced it wiht father and it makes much mroe sense. :]
Of course you end it there! Bah, I waited so long for that too! Lol. But that's kinda my fault not yours, so I'm not blaming you or anything. :D Ahhhhh.... Uh, please update soon. I love this story so much. I think you're an amazing writer. One of the best on here. It's a shame it took me so long to read you're storires, 'cause you used to have more on here. But I know you still have a Quizilla account, but I'm rarely on there, well, compared to how often I'm on here.
wow, i'm really anxious to see what charles will say. your writing is so captivating and i simply can't get enough of it. i have both my sisters reading this one, haha. i even managed to convince my stubborn older sister, and now she's addicted!
HOLY MOTHER OF MATT DAMON, i loved it. oh my lord, it's so eerie the way you gave charles a creepy side. it scares me to find out what secrets he's keeping! please PLEASE update soon!
I feel bad for wren :( And I think Charles is scary. He reminds me of one of those psycho killers from the horror movies. ...But you know, that's just me
Sound the trumpets and release the doves :) I came on here and realized that I was like three chapters behind... not good lol.
Anywho, I still love the creative aspect of this story with the blood moon and past generations; I can't wait to see how that comes into play.
I also like Faerie's character even more when the thought of love scared her at first: mostly because I'm like that. However, now that her and Alphonse are in love... I'm happy about that too. The flirting and the teasing is so cute :)
Prince and Charles... I don't know what to say about them.
i can't believe i missed so much while i was gone. :( and i'm interested in that thingy about the blood moon? maybe... it means something else. i don't know. i should stop guessing; and let you do your work. (:
<3!
even if i stop commenting; it doesn't mean that i don't like this story anymore. (:
I must admit, I have fallen in love with your story. It's holds a sort of Romantique feel to it, much like Nathaniel Hawthorne's writings. I have a simple question though, or observation if you will. Do the seven Morgensterns have anything to do with the seven deadly sins? I find it quite interesting how all of their names and characteristics relate to them. It seems as if you're either going to tie it into the story later, or you truly are a writer from the Romantique period and using symbolism to help create the illusion of pure, raw poetry. (Princely Pride, Envy, Greed, Wrath, Lust, Sloth, and Gluttony.) Very creatively unique. I'm still attempting to figure out what exactly Alphonse and Faerie relate to. So far all I've come up with are Angles and Faith. I'm probably very wrong though. Many kudos on your stylistic writing.
No lie.
Stories based in older eras have always fascinated me.
You officially have another dedicated reader<3