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  • kayluhCHAOTIC

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    This story has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read.
    No lie.
    Stories based in older eras have always fascinated me.
    You officially have another dedicated reader<3
    February 1st, 2009 at 11:02pm
  • emodeerf

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    oh my god!
    cliffhanger!!!
    you're a meanie. =X

    do update soon. (:
    i really wanna find out what is the truth.

    <3!
    January 31st, 2009 at 09:09am
  • stepheneatsyourface!

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    those wind/ghost/whisper voices are creepy.
    but ever so curious. i want ot know more!
    AND im super-dee-dooper to hear what charles has to say and what the letter says!!!! :D

    also,
    "Maybe it was stranger that I was more concerned with my matrimonial future than a future without my future"
    was that last future supposed ot be father? because i replaced it wiht father and it makes much mroe sense. :]
    January 30th, 2009 at 06:42pm
  • lazydancer

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    Of course you end it there!
    Bah, I waited so long for that too! Lol.
    But that's kinda my fault not yours, so I'm not blaming you or anything. :D
    Ahhhhh....
    Uh, please update soon.
    I love this story so much.
    I think you're an amazing writer.
    One of the best on here. It's a shame it took me so long to read you're storires, 'cause you used to have more on here. But I know you still have a Quizilla account, but I'm rarely on there, well, compared to how often I'm on here.
    January 30th, 2009 at 07:44am
  • silvertongue

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    wow, i'm really anxious to see what charles will say. your writing is so captivating and i simply can't get enough of it.
    i have both my sisters reading this one, haha. i even managed to convince my stubborn older sister, and now she's addicted!
    January 29th, 2009 at 08:13pm
  • brinaboo

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    I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story

    I'm quite happy I found it.
    Amazing story;; update soon, please.
    January 28th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • silvertongue

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    HOLY MOTHER OF MATT DAMON, i loved it.
    oh my lord, it's so eerie the way you gave charles a creepy side. it scares me to find out what secrets he's keeping!
    please PLEASE update soon!
    January 28th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • break.my.bones

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    I feel bad for wren :(
    And I think Charles is scary. He reminds me of one of those psycho killers from the horror movies.
    ...But you know, that's just me
    January 28th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • fond-farewell

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    soliloquy is amazing
    the last chapter was really good, charles is so scary!
    and if i was faerie, i would've ripped the necklace off of greer.
    January 27th, 2009 at 11:30pm
  • Dream.Your.Reality

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    Sound the trumpets and release the doves :)
    I came on here and realized that I was like three chapters behind... not good lol.

    Anywho, I still love the creative aspect of this story with the blood moon and past generations; I can't wait to see how that comes into play.

    I also like Faerie's character even more when the thought of love scared her at first: mostly because I'm like that. However, now that her and Alphonse are in love... I'm happy about that too. The flirting and the teasing is so cute :)

    Prince and Charles... I don't know what to say about them.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    January 24th, 2009 at 05:40pm
  • silvertongue

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    OH MY GODDDDDD! It was so hypnotizing, how Alphonse finally was happy, and they ovd eachother, and everything is good for a moment.

    I love you for writing this, you have no idea. This is so incredibly captivating!
    MORE!
    January 24th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • emodeerf

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    one word babe,
    one word:

    WOW!!!

    i can't believe i missed so much while i was gone. :(
    and i'm interested in that thingy about the blood moon?
    maybe...
    it means something else.
    i don't know.
    i should stop guessing;
    and let you do your work. (:

    <3!

    even if i stop commenting;
    it doesn't mean that i don't like this story anymore. (:
    January 22nd, 2009 at 02:19pm
  • peacekisseslove

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    I love this story! Chapter 13 made me cry though. I just really, really don't want him to die :'[
    January 21st, 2009 at 11:56pm
  • break.my.bones

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    :)
    Using a kiss as a threat...ingenious.
    January 21st, 2009 at 09:25pm
  • All Full Of Lies

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    What a marvolous, spectacular, wonderful, amazing, beautiful update.
    January 21st, 2009 at 08:24pm
  • Inspired-Delusions

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    holy cheese sticks. i've been searching for this kind of story for AGES.

    i can't tell you enough how much i am addicted to your work; its pure genius!
    January 21st, 2009 at 01:52am
  • Samantha Weasley

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    Loveddd the update.
    She's in love -- and she admitted it!
    <3 I adore this.
    January 18th, 2009 at 03:17am
  • Samantha Weasley

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    This is getting so much better with each chapter.
    It was great!
    Update soon!
    January 17th, 2009 at 04:49pm
  • lazydancer

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    Ah, I loved the update, and I'm waiting for more. :D
    January 17th, 2009 at 08:36am
  • SmilingIrishFool

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    I must admit, I have fallen in love with your story. It's holds a sort of Romantique feel to it, much like Nathaniel Hawthorne's writings. I have a simple question though, or observation if you will. Do the seven Morgensterns have anything to do with the seven deadly sins? I find it quite interesting how all of their names and characteristics relate to them. It seems as if you're either going to tie it into the story later, or you truly are a writer from the Romantique period and using symbolism to help create the illusion of pure, raw poetry. (Princely Pride, Envy, Greed, Wrath, Lust, Sloth, and Gluttony.) Very creatively unique. I'm still attempting to figure out what exactly Alphonse and Faerie relate to. So far all I've come up with are Angles and Faith. I'm probably very wrong though. Many kudos on your stylistic writing.
    January 17th, 2009 at 01:34am