1. Your writing is fantastic --- your descriptions could kill me, seriously. 2. The plot is thickening and it isn't moving too fast at all! It is perfect! 3. The violin and the North Wing is just spooky! I want to know more.
You're writing is like the title, as you say, it rolls off the tongue. Keep writing this. Geez woman. Remember us small folk when you're famous. Okay? :file: Definitely pimping this!