Soliloquy - Comments

seriously reading this again for like the third or fourth time. haha it's so good!

I've only read the first four chapters, so I only have a few ideas about this story. I was wondering if you've ever seen Fullmetal Alchemist?

So I FINALLY read something by you. Girl, you've been on my list for almost a year I think, haha. But of course, I made the mistake of not subscribing so I forgot. Never gonna make that mistake again. x]

Either I'll read this really slowly because I like to savour things (what a lie! I eat marshmellows so fast. Savour isn't in my dictionary.) or I'll sit here until 5AM. But either way, I'mma read this masterpiece.

And can I just say how super duper happy I am that you have a million other stories for me to read. Gah, you are simply awesome and I'm sure most of Mibba knows that by now. :D

I am just speechless! This was honestly one of the BEST stories I've ever read. And every chapter was so intriguing and you pulled me in right from the beginning with all the mysterious characters, the curses, the secrets and lies :P You put a lot of thought, creativity, and imagination into this and mixed it all together so well!

Haha, I started reading this story this morning and when I was half-way through it, my mom wanted me to go shopping for eggs and vegetables and I was SO SO upset because I was right at the part where Charles says he had to tell Faerie something. So the entire time I was looking for eggs at the store I was like "HOLY CRAP. What will he tell her?!"

Yes. I was that obsessed.

HOLY COW WOMAN.
Haha, I only just finished the first chapter and I have to say you are just so flipping awesome and sucking people into your awesome stories! Now I have to finish this story, thanks to you :)
It's so so so so well-written and just awesometastically wonderocious.

D: THIS WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT.
You threw twists in there that I hadn't been able to see even if they had been right under my nose. This was incredibly well written.

Now I shall go off and start Lament.

Again, awesome awesome awesome job.

Oh my goodness, this was amazing. It hooked me in and I never wanted to stop reading. I did no work today and just sat in my chair and didn't move because I couldn't stop reading. I'm very excited to read the sequel but I'll have to make sure I have time because I know once I get started I'll keep going! haha, loved this story so much!! :)

Wow.
Wow wow wow.
I just finished reading this story, and holy crap!
This is the most brilliantly thought up and crafted stories that I have ever read. The whole experience of reading this was purely magical.

I loved how you had so many twists, and hints towards what was truly going on. It made you think and wonder so much, and you have so many amazing ideas! It's unreal!

I especially loved the ending. It was perfect. I get so sick of fairy tale happy endings where every single thing fits perfectly in place. I thought how you did it made the story so much more real. I like how you still leave things to ponder upon, and there is still saddness in the ending, but yet it's happy.

This is just amazing.

Now I'm off to read Lament :)

this story is crazyyyy good!

seriously, girlie.
you could get this published,
along with lament.
i would buy them!
they're that amazing.
i'm hooked after ONE chapter!

OK.

First of all, this is an amazing story. I haven't finished it yet but I read a bit every night before bed like a pwoper novel. Honestly, it's incredible. I love your writing style and you have a way with descriptions that makes me want to steal you and bundle you up and demand you to teach me how to write like you.

Secondly, what is it about the layout that makes me so much more envious of you? Honestly, I don't know.

Lastly, what is the name of the font that you used for the title? It's driving me mad 'cause I can't find it and it's really pretty. -dies-

So yes. Still reading, and slowly, but it's worth it. Definitely.

Okay...I'm very aware that that I am, like. zillions of years behind the rest of the readers, the stories finnished and has a sequel.
BUT.

I had a peeping tom? moment on your conversation with Katelyn, because I was talking to her at the same time, so I felt like I should check this out, and see what it was about.
And Now I simply have to read it.
I love historical writing, like this, definitely one of my vices. I could sit for days on end reading a good one.
I've read the prologue so far, and I'm stunned. It was really, really amazing.
It might take me an awfully long time, to catch up. I barely have time to think straight, let alone constantly read. But I simply can't pass this up. I'm subscribing and going to read as fast as I can.
Just don't do anything rash and delete it before I finish, I just may die..OR have to hunt you down and steal a copy to finnish it myself.
haha.
well then, that was rambleville.
Oh well.

I loved it, and Hi. I'm Emily.

So, I've read We Were Birds, and since that was so amazing, I figured I would read this, as well.
I don't really know why I haven't before, because it looks pretty amazing.
I know I'm definately late and all, but who doesn't enjoy a nice story comment?
Ahaha. Anyways, I'm going to read this and catch up with the sequel; though I'll probably give you more feedback between then. :)

I really like this story, and I know I'm pretty late on commenting since it's done and has a sequel, but yeah. And I was just wondering how you got your title like that. It's really pretty and I've never seen that before.

Aw this story was so good! i loved it i really did. is there a sequel at all? or do you intend to leave it like that?

I've planned to read every one of your stories since i started reading Shadows :) I just finished Soliloquy about thiry seconds ago from now and i wish to tell you...

HOW FREAKIN' AMAZING IT WAS!

I actually felt like I was turning the last page of my favoutite book and pressing it to my heart because I loved it that much.

You deserve more than popularity on an online writing communtiy. You deserve to be world-wide, Emily. Just correct the extrememly small amount mistakes that WordPad doesn't tell you about and it's ready for publishing!

I can't wait to read the sequal, and that is my plan, OH! it's about to turn midnight.

it's 23:59pm :)

AND NOW IT'S 00:00am.

posted at exactly midnight in england on the 6th april 2009.

HAPPY MONDAY! :)

I just started reading and so far i'm entirely captivated by this story. You know that i will give you a long, thoughtful comment once i've gotten further.

For some reason unknown reason i always imagine the song 'a little respect' by wheatus whenever i'm reading this. So, i downloaded it and i listen to it while reading.

Though that may just be my weird, disfunctional brain. Anyway, this is great!

This story is so amazing! I love how I get to know more and more of the characters. I just finished reading chapter sixteen, and I must say finding out about Prince's...umm, preference is such a shame. :(

Oh and I was thinking about this story last night... I thought of the Morgensterns.. and how I see them as the representation of the seven deadly sins. I know it's silly, but yeah.. >.>

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EDIT;
That was a beautiful ending.
Painfully beautiful.

wow.
i really have to catch up on this one!

it was great...
except for what happened to prince and all. =/

i cant wait for the sequel
i really hope alphonse comes back
i loved him!