When You Wake up and Scream - Comments

  • emmalillies

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    i know this story is completed, but i read it a while ago.
    i cried on the last chapter. x_x and usually it takes a lot for me to do it.

    this was an absolutey AMAZING story. it was a pleasure to read and was well written.
    i still think about it too, even though its probably been like, 3 or 4 months ago when i finished it.
    buaggh i can't find words to describe how amazing this was, even though i highly dislike thoes kind of endings i suprisingly loved this one, i know im rambling about the same thing, but i cant help it. c:

    you truly did an amazing job on thi story, and it was an honor to read it.
    xx.
    October 29th, 2010 at 12:55am
  • izzylizzy95

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    wow i read it again and it hit me just as powerfully. I stayed up all last night. I guess in a way it was a good ending bcause it was realistic, but im always gonna wish that he had changed and that him and Naoise lived happily together. But i liked the ending... i cried again... but i feel like everything was just right. It's sad though because i do think he was a good person even though he was a killer. It puts everything in a new perspective gor me. At first i didn't want to read it because i knew in the end he would get caught and i would end up crying because i always do when the main character dies, but i just felt like i should to get a new realization and view on serial killers. I still do think it's wrong, but now i think about what caused them to be that way, and to just think of what was going through their minds. One thing is for sure, I will never forget this story and i will never forget the story of Conan Connally.
    April 20th, 2010 at 04:47am
  • izzylizzy95

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    aw this story is sad. It made me cry... and i don't cry easily
    April 18th, 2010 at 06:58am
  • Peeta Mellark;

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    Oh, my God. You did this so perfectly, "perfect" doesn't even begin to cover it. It has been a long time since you've started it, and now I'm sad to see it's done [: but don't think I won't come back and reread it, 'cos I will [:

    I love this. Not even kidding. LOVE IT. :D
    April 18th, 2010 at 01:26am
  • Caravaggio

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    Oh my God! I seriously almost started crying! I have tears pricking at my eyes right now!

    It's so easy to forget what he was like when this story started and how much has happened. I almost forgot those moments he had with Naoise! You're amazing. This story is amazing.

    . . . AMAZING!
    April 17th, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • StruckByLightening

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    That was one bloody amazing story. Great job! xx :)
    April 17th, 2010 at 07:06pm
  • Kimm

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    wow.

    wow.

    omg. wow

    aw. how sad. :] but you ended it perfectly.
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:44pm
  • Peeta Mellark;

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    I'm all caught up now! :......(

    That was too awesome for words. I'mma have to come back and give the full review.

    I loved it. Absolutely loved it.
    March 31st, 2010 at 06:49am
  • Caravaggio

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    *lip trembling* *sniffle* MY BABY! That man just killed one of my sons! WAHHHHHH!!!!!!!

    Absolutely beautifully done though. You didn't let him commit suicide, but you didn't give it a cheesy ending (although I suppose the epilogue is the ending).
    March 26th, 2010 at 10:53pm
  • Kimm

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    wow. beautiful. :] can't wait for the epilogue
    March 22nd, 2010 at 12:18am
  • Caravaggio

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    So, when the people were talking about their children, I nearly started crying. This was a very moving chapter.

    And that meeting with Naoise. . . Seriously, so touching. It brought tears to my eyes.

    Great job.
    March 18th, 2010 at 11:33pm
  • Kimm

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    omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhmazing !!! D: and so so so sad. I half-cried when Oran's mother talked.
    March 17th, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Another great chapter! Sorry it took me a bit to get around to it! I just always want to wait until I have enough time to enjoy your chapters. :D

    I feel so bad for both of them. . . It's like, I knew this was coming all along, but I just don't want it to!
    March 11th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • India.

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    I feel like i'm reading pre-Dexter Morgan. It's not bad, infact I love it. It's brilliantly written. You've done a great job portraying both emotions of the characters. I never liked Mary to begin with. She was complete bananas.
    February 28th, 2010 at 05:13pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Losing it a bit, is he? . . . Not that he was ever entirely here.

    Great chapter, Nuala.
    February 28th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Kimm

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    As sick as this may sound...
    I want conan and naoise to run away...
    Hopeful sad puppy eyes
    February 7th, 2010 at 01:52pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Fun Fact: You can stay awake for ten days before you die of sleep deprivation.

    Aww! He's all sickly like! Make him eat! That Detective Anti-Virus is not taking very good care of our son, Nuala! I want a word with him!

    Wow. He's really losing it, huh?

    Anyway, great new chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
    February 6th, 2010 at 08:47pm
  • void.

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    It's been a while since you've had a good chapter,
    but might I say when you type a good one, it's good.

    I'm curious to see how the story ends. Keep writing :)
    February 6th, 2010 at 06:56pm
  • Kimm

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    Sob and read sob and read sob and read :')) I love it
    February 6th, 2010 at 06:15pm
  • Caravaggio

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    So, I'm very tempted to go back through and count the Jeffrey Dahmer references.

    Still, the chapter was very good. Conán's mood swings are starting to make me dizzy though. XP

    Great chapter. Spectacular chapter. Amazingly awesome chapter.

    That is all.
    January 25th, 2010 at 04:25pm