When You Wake up and Scream - Comments

I adore this story, seriously. It's the only original story I've read all the way through on here. Probably because I love reading about serial killers >.>
I can't wait for the next one.

Have I ever mentioned that McAfee make me think of virus protection? Detective McAfee. Protecting you from viruses and serial killers for thirty years. XP

Anyway, I absolutely loved the chapter. It makes me sad that he's losing Naoise kind of, but, it's not as if I expected her to stay with him when she figures it out. "I'm a serial killer, but you love me right?" "Yes, I'll stay with you forever!" :lol:

I'm scatterbrained right now. So I'm just going to leave it at, it was great.

*nods*

Love Sheen

Whoa. That was hardcore. I haven't read the last few chapters, so I had to catch up.

Conan. Will. Get. Better. I'm positive of it! Naoise will figure it out, won't she? But she's GOT to help him!

I'm not making much sense, am I? Beautiful.

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

I hate to point this out, because I love this story so much, but, will the cops not check into that whole "family member dying" thing? I mean, there would have to be a record of it.

Oh gosh, was the cop pulling him over really only a few weeks ago in the story? Seems so much longer. :D

Anyway. Great chapter, as always. This is getting to my favourite part of all serial killer stories. . . Where the cops come in and the stress is high!

Love Sheen

You know what I love? Reading this with an Irish accent. It makes everything sound cooler.

Ooh, what are Super Noodles?

This chapter made me so nervous! I don't like cops!

The cop seems very confiedent though. Makes me wonder how that would turn out if he wasn't the serial killer, you know?

Anyway, great chapter. I was wondering how long it would take the cops.

It's so twisted. I love it. And I've only read the first chapter.

*jumps around, squealing like a little girl, in excitement* I just found a new story.

How do you pronounce Naoise?

I was sad when there was no cover for the story on this page. . . It seems like it should have some sort of epic cover.

Small typo: You're always wondering around alone and drunk,. Wondering, wandering. What's the real difference, anyway?

Oohh. The story is getting so intense! Though, if I was Naoise, I think I would be afraid to tell anyone about my theory, just for the chance that I'm wrong and I look stupid. XP

Love Sheen

Or garsh. Not good. Should've taken away all of his sharp objects.

Great chapter, as always.

Love Sheen

Haha. I love how casually Conán is becoming more insane. Wonderful.

I feel bad for Gerald. He seems nice. Oh well.

Great chapter.

Love Sheen

O.O

No...freakin...way

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

No, no NO! I think I'd like to hurt you for doing this to poor Conan! And to make Naoise go away! That is TERRIBLE! Genius...but, terrible...makes me sad...

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

Aww! The serial killer is getting attached to her! How cute. But really, you're making me find a serial killer adorable. . . Don't let him know I said that.

Few things:

Well, I want to know you're be OK.- Just a typo, but shouldn't it be you'll?

Also, all of the lovely commas at the end of dialogue made my heart happy! =D . . . Even if you still don't do it all of the time. I supposed those times you still chose not to use commas is the other "typo" I found.

By the way, that whole kissing scene was wonderfully done. How it was awkward, yet not at the same time. How it was much more like they needed to kiss than just some slutty thing. Beautiful.

Love Sheen

Is it bad that I was just thinking, "Oh, Conán's alright as long as Steve doesn't start answering back."? hahahahahahaha

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Love Sheen

This was am amazing chapter!

You need to make Conan better!!!! :P

Love&Inwauh,
Sam

Aw this is so sweet. It's well written and has a good plotline. Keep up the awesome work!

As always, good chapter. It was kind of sweet, which is odd since we're talking about Conán.

One thing I noticed:

and hung back out of view Little subject verb agreement. Should have something like, and he hung back out of view I believe. The way you have it, makes it sound like Naoise is watching herself. . . ^_^

Again great. Can't wait for more.

Love Sheen

You can always count on grandparents for food can't you? :D

Great chapter!

Oh, wow. That's pretty intense. Awesome :) Can't wait for more!

Love&Inwauh,
Sam