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  • The Dodger

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    Aw sorry about you getting sick. I hate the flu.
    But that update was fantastic!
    I love how excentric Brody is :XD
    More whenever you can, I can wait for this :D
    January 22nd, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    hahaa I agree with everyone else, Brian needs to get balls.
    update soon (:
    Brian hasn't earnt his balls back yet. They're still in a jar on my shelf from when I cut them off after the first chapter :file:

    Brody! I love that boy... his want for a spanking was hilarious, especially when she gave it to him and he still jumped :lol: And cookie dough and coffee for breakfast... well, each to their own. I'm not surprised he was turned off the cookie dough by what Dee said. Ewww....

    Dammit. Reading about her drinking Red Bulls made me want one.. I'm gonna get one tomorrow. I would now, but it's 4:30am and I can't be bothered to drive to the service station.

    Ohhh... Clap to Dee for her standing up for herself and demanding he tell her why he's a complete asshole and why he screwed some whore that night! Especially seeing as it sure has gotten to him, hasn't it? He's such a little pansy bitch. I wanna back hand him so bad.

    I really wonder if he has an excuse at all... I assume he does, but I wonder what the hell it is. No matter what, it wont even be close to a good enough reason for crushing her like that. You know what pisses me off the most? He has NO remorse about it at all. He just flat out doesn't give a fuck. It's just.... unbelieveable.

    He had to get the last word in the end, didnt he? And using her nickname that he once owned was just the icing on the torture cake. Is it bad I momentarily wished she'd back her car over him? :shifty

    I can't wait for more.. you've honestly got me completely hooked on this one :D
    January 21st, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • celiaeatsballz

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    hahaa I agree with everyone else, Brian needs to get balls.
    update soon (:
    January 19th, 2009 at 08:11pm
  • Fast_Melodic

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    God, I want to kick Brian's ass.
    i think we should start a club just for that!
    We should. :)
    Brian needs to man the fuck up and just tell Delilah. He's such a pussy...

    More soon?
    January 18th, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • catastrophe.

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    I cant believe he wont tell her
    January 18th, 2009 at 08:32pm
  • RockOut

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    good for her standing up to the shitheaded asshole!!! I dont get what is so hard about telling her why he decided to cheat....its simple really.
    January 18th, 2009 at 08:01pm
  • xxMommyVengeancexx

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    What.
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    Freaking.
    DICK!
    Ughh.
    Why can't he just tell her why?
    WHY!
    Awesome update.
    =]]
    I'm glad that Delilah isn't backing down.
    Girls like that are my heros.
    January 18th, 2009 at 06:53pm
  • The Dodger

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    OH MY GOD!
    How the hell haven't I read this until now?!?
    Shit, Brian's a right fucking asswipe isn't he? Good lord just grow a pair and tell her the truth! Fucking duchebag. How could he do something like that?! And at the reception of their WEDDING?!? Fucking hell. I really do hate Brian right now.

    But I love this story. In Love
    Update as sonn as you can.
    January 18th, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • Hoodie.V

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    ugh, Brian is such an as*
    he needs a swift kick to his butt so he can start functioning properly. =]
    January 18th, 2009 at 04:38pm
  • HrdcrChick?! xD

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    Awesomeeeeee!!!
    It's really cool so far! ;D
    Kepp updating it!! ;)
    Subscribes**
    January 18th, 2009 at 01:51pm
  • xxMommyVengeancexx

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    I need another dose of this wonderful addiction.
    Like soon.
    I'm so totally in love.
    It's not even funny.
    If I could.
    I would marry it.
    =]]
    January 18th, 2009 at 06:01am
  • Hoodie.V

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    I just started reading this and I already love it. =]
    Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    January 16th, 2009 at 06:56pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Argh!

    "Well, as you can see, I'm happy with Tina now. I'm not looking to get back into the past especially with someone who left in the first place," he said.

    FUCKING WANKER! Sorry, but he is!! How fucking dare he even contemplate saying something like that. Major assface!

    You're right, I'm still majorly pissed at him. I'm this -> <- close to putting his detached testicles into a food processor and hitting 'pulverise'. But I'll hold out and see if he can really push me over the edge.

    Her reaction when she first saw him standing with the boys... I felt it! I felt her sudden nerves and anxiety, my heart actually fluttered a little in anticipation of what she was about to endure... so great job!

    And I officially hate Tina and would like to throw her out of an plane without a parachute. Or maybe walk her off a cliff and hand her an anvil. Though it was hilarious when she realized exactly who Delilah was... stupid bitch.

    The boys reactions were interesting. I'm glad Val, Matt, and Johnny were happy to see her and welcomed her back into their lives. As for Jimmy... I'm torn. On the one hand, he's being quite harsh and nasty when he really doesn't know the full story. However, on the other hand, he has a right to be upset because he was the one that would've had to pick up the pieces after she left. Granted, Brian brought that pain and misery on himself, but a good friend tends to look past that. Though I'd like to see Jimmy realize that Brian was the one who fucked up and then ease up on laying the guilt trip on Dee.

    Brody was such a darl in this chapter. Being such a great friend, supportive and caring when she needed and amusing and entertaining when the time called for it. He's fast becoming one of my favourite original characters of yours (aside from those in Sleepwalking) and I look forward to more scenes with him! =)

    I realize I kind of worked backwards with this comment, but I needed to get my frustrations regarding Brian out of the way, so it just made sense I then continue to rant backwards :D

    Love ya, my hetro life partner!
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:57pm
  • decadent

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    i love this story so much more with every chapter you write. it's absolutely amazing and even though i told you that HJL is my all-time-favourite sevenfold story, i might have to reconsider that.

    i would love to gush about EVERYTHING, all the characters, their personalities, the dynamics between them, the stupid blonde thing.. but i'm at a loss for words. just think of the big rambling i have going on in my mind right now and settle with that.

    In Love
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:09pm
  • bloodravyn

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    God, I want to kick Brian's ass.
    i think we should start a club just for that!
    January 16th, 2009 at 10:34am
  • WOAHdreambig

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    first, i love how long your chapters are, it always makes me so happy
    second, jimmy being the mean one was kinda surprising to me but it worked
    third, stupid brian
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:03am
  • Rosalia

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    gosh, Brian's such a dick. I hope whatsherface leaves him just the same, I dare him to go to delilah.
    January 16th, 2009 at 04:15am
  • celiaeatsballz

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    I love this story, update soon! (:
    January 16th, 2009 at 02:48am
  • R...

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    Dang this is good.
    January 16th, 2009 at 02:21am
  • Fast_Melodic

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    God, I want to kick Brian's ass.
    January 16th, 2009 at 02:04am