Denial - Comments

still waters; (100)

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This is awesome! I loved it! :D
You are definitely an amazing writer. (:

February 14th, 2010 at 05:06pm

StormerVengeance (100)

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I finished this today and all i have to say is wow, oh my god, i loved it and wow.

April 25th, 2009 at 06:17am

StormerVengeance (100)

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OMG holy crap and wow wow wow wow! Is all I can say to describe chapters 11-20 WOW! Hahahaha

April 19th, 2009 at 10:47pm

StormerVengeance (100)

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I love this story, I have just started reading it and I am only on chapter 10 but I thought I would say how much I love it and I will be getting back to the rest of it as soon as I post this hahaha!

April 19th, 2009 at 07:36am

J.A.R. (100)

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I'm a new reader adn i just finished reading chapter 29 and it says she was born in 1964 that makes her 17 years older then matt and zacky who were both born in '81??????

March 19th, 2009 at 09:58pm

NikkiEst.6661 (100)

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Omg! I can't belive it's finished! I was NOT expecting that!
Let me no when then sequel is out!
Loved it!
Well done!
x

March 16th, 2009 at 03:10pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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I cant believe she just left with him without going to see everyone else!
So excited to see what's gonna happen in the sequel!

March 15th, 2009 at 08:51pm

DeleteMePlease (100)

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I'm sad this is over. =[: I decided to come comment since you always leave me comments on my stories and I've been reading this for a while now. Hopefully the sequel will be up soon, I'm looking forward to seeing her finally getting to be with Zacky. =]:

March 15th, 2009 at 07:21pm

HrdcrChick?! xD (100)

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THIS IS SOOOO SAD!!!!!
but i like it. ;D

SEQUEL DEMANDED.
or else. XD

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!
i'll pop my brains out. XP

Btw, OMFG, you put me NUMBER ONE ON THE LIST!!!
Oh yay! You're soo my number one on my list! ;DD;D

Xooo <333

For Denial!
May it rest in peace.

March 15th, 2009 at 02:14pm

XxX_Numb_XxX (100)

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Hey

Okay, so I'm commenting as I read. I love the story line, it's simple yet not. It's like she's their sister, but she isn't.

Chapter one was hard to read. The spacing out is odd.. You have to, cause it's actually a rule, leave a blank line between each paragraph or someone else speaks.

So for example:

]"I was just joking Matt, we're done for the day."

"Good." He said and kissed her cheek. There was a knock on the front door which surprised me, none of us knocked around here. I walked over to answer it and was surprised to see, I didn't recognize who was standing in front of me.

"Um, hi, who are you?" She smiled a wicked grin. I already don't like this girl and I don't even know her.

"Hm, my name is Gena. I'm Zacky's new girlfriend. You are Helena Williams right?"

"Yes, and what's it to you?" I said, already getting infuriated from the inside out. This was the girl Zacky was keeping from me, and now I can see why.

So like that. Cause it's kinda hard to read it when it's all crammeed up, you don't actually always know who's talking.

So yeah, overall it's a good story. And I've even subscribed.

Take care,
XxX_Numb_XxX

March 13th, 2009 at 09:45pm