Denial - Comments

I mean Leny needs to admit her feelins for Zacky haha
x

Tihana should punch Zacky in the face! :-)
haha!
She needs to admit her feelins for Zacky!
It's killing me!! I can only imagine what its doing to Zacky!
lol
Great update!!! :-)

omg she didn't say yes?!
Poor Zacky!
Even still, i can have him now right?! :-)
I think they should have some seeded affair haha!
great update!

POOR ZACKYYYYY!!!!!!! ='[:

POOR ZACKYYYYY!!!!!!! ='[:

aww poor Zacky!
cant wait to see what happens next!!

:) I loved the update!

and I was behind so I just read your very important authors note
and you're right to have not listened to her; her comment was rude and uncalled for

no one is perfect with their grammer
not even professional writers have perfect grammer hence why they have editors

anways the story's great!
udpate soom please!

love the update :]

Ohhh zacky makes me :-P *drools*
If i was helena, i'd push him up the side of his car!
haha
but thats just me :-)

great update, cant wait for more!

Great update=D
Don't listen to that girl,
i've read both storys and yours isn't
a 'rip' of her story!
so keep writing i can't wait for more=]

Love this story!

That was a great update girl!! Don't sweat what someone else says about your stories. That's one person out of all of us who read and love this story. :-) I've been reading "Unwanted in Wonderland" for a while now and granted there are a few similarities here and there, the plot and everything aren't the same. You're doing great. Keep it up!!

Plus I've noticed she has no stories herself,
so therefore cannot judge,
she doesn't understand it from a writers point of view :-)

Wow!
I read that comment when I saw it,
and frankly I thought it was way out of order!
And alot of it bull aswell :-)
Take no notice love!
x

awh that update was great :) update soon?!
dont listen to that comment, you just write your story the way you wanna do it! :)

:) *tear* :) lol. but yeah. That chapter is so cute. :D
:) In Zacky's arms. sigh...
but yeah, Dont listen to that mean-commenting-person. Everyone makes mistakes. Hell, I make THOUSANDS of mistakes. Just look at my one-and-only story. :) Lol. but yeah.
WAITING FOR UPDATE!!!!! :D

Btw, fuck that chick which told you that you copied off someone.
What does she know anyway??
If that girl Helena Fuego was angry or sumthin, I think that she would like tell you in face that you're a copycat and not some other suck up chick.
Love y'all!! =DDD

I lovey dovey this storey!!! =)))
Lol.
Yh, really. XDDD

Attention Dearest Readers!!

This was first a journal post, but it is a defininite MUST READ!!

Alright, so I've been working on a story here on Mibba for a couple of months or so now. It's the best story, by far, that I've done so far. This story is called Denial.

I have 57 comments, 310 readers, and 65 subscribers to be exact. Well in my opinion, my story is doing really great. Or was, that is.

You see, my story is a fan-fiction story about Avenged Sevenfold, or mainly, Zacky Vengeance of Avenged Sevenfold.

Alright, here's where the ranting comes in.

I had 53 comments, great comments, before the nasty, false accusation comment came along. The first, and only one.

"Hello Miss Princess. Just wanted to mention a few things i've noticed about your story Denial. Every other event, if not sentence, is a direct rip off of Helena Fiego's story Unwanted In Wonderland. You may change a few things, but it's more than obvious that you're a little copy cat. Plagerism aside, have you noticed how awfully structured your paragraphs and dialogue are? Every single time someone speaks you should either indent and single space like a novel, or double space like most people on Mibba. You should also find someone to help you check your work, your typos are astounding. So, unless you sleep better knowing you're stealing someone else's earned popularity and respect as a writer, I believe you owe Ms. Fiego and your own "fans" an apology for being so ridiculously uncreative. You should also learn to form your own plot, original characters, and events. Good day."

This girl doesn't know me, she's never previously commented on my story, I think she was just simply looking for someone to pick on this day, and now it's effecting me greatly.

She accused me of Plagiarism of Helena Fiego's fan-fiction story of Avenged Sevenfold/Zack Vengeance, Unwanted In Wonderland.

I admit, yes, I did get my inspiration for my story from hers. Here's why. When I saw the title of that girl's story, I thought it was completely ridiculous. I know, ridicule by judging a book by it's cover. It's so completely wrong and I'm usually against it. And when I remembered this, that's when I decided to read the story and give it a chance.

I found that her story was amazing, infact, the most amazing story on this site, in my opinion. She's just a very terrific writer. I'm not quite sure what it is exactly that draws me back to her story every time, but she always has me anticipating every chapter.

So I was inspired by her story, to write my own which is now a huge success. The main character of my story, Helena Williams, is infact, inspired by Helena Fiego herself!

But here's the thing! Our plots and our story lines are completely and totally different. I mean, if you'd read Mine and Her's together you'd see that for yourself.

I mean, there are so, so many things that make our stories different. And I don't know why she decided to single me out when there are a hundred other Zacky Vengeance writers on here, and some of their stories come very close to sounding like Helena's. So why she chose to pick on me I don't know.

But I wrote her and calmly explained all of this to her two days ago and she never wrote back.

I have two theories. One, she knows I'm right and has nothing to say. Two, she hasn't got to it yet.

But either way, ever since that comment, I've only had three more and it's really disturbing. I mean, i just updated what i think is the best chapter yet, and most exciting. I've even got more readers and subscribers now than I had last chapter, but no new comments from the commenters that would usually comment.

I'm pretty sure it's because of that one ridiculous comment. And the problem is, I can't delete it! And it's effecting my story horribly.

And another thing, she criticized my dialog and spelling errors. Well believe me, when I wrote her back, I was sure to mention that I am still just a high school student, not a published writer out writing novels, I'm still in practice. And I also made sure to point out that even Miss Helena Fiego herself has made quite a few spelling errors in her story, and multiples errors in just one chapter. But I also pointed out that unlike some people, I took the time to understand that people get in a rush or in a hurry, much like myself.

I mean, I'll tel you what I told her. I live in a household of six people, including myself, and one computer. My mom works online all day and I rarely get chance to get online being as I have to share the computer with all my three sister, my mom and her online job, and my dad! Plus, when I do get on, my time is broken down into a 30 minute time limit because my sisters and I have to alternate taking turns on the computer and when I update a chapter, I like to try and get it done within that 30 minute time span while I'm on and have the chance, while trying to make no spelling errors! It's really not easy.

Some people just don't understand that.

I also explained to her that if need be, if it would make her happy, I'd write Helena personally and ask her permission to continue writing my story as is.

Plus, I was waiting until the end of the story and the as like a big finale for all the Unwanted In Wonderland lovers, I was gonna put a last chapter telling about how I got my inspiration for the story and the main character and such. I told the girl all of this. And she never wrote back, so I guess we know what this means.

Maybe, maybe not. But hey, I'm not complaining either way. At least she's keeping to herself now. But I still want my commenters back!

So if any of you see this, do NOT let that comment effect yours!

I feel much better now.

Thank you for reading all comments are welcome.

=))

Vengeance Princess~