February 24th, 2009 at 03:36pm
:O I spelt Zacky's name wrong!
Damnit!
I meant *Zacky
Denial - Comments
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February 24th, 2009 at 02:49pm
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I'm in love with this story,
seriously!
It should have way more comments too. :-)
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
I love Zacy :-D
More soon?
xFebruary 24th, 2009 at 02:48pm -
Hello Miss Princess. Just wanted to mention a few things i've noticed about your story Denial. Every other event, if not sentence, is a direct rip off of Helena Fiego's story Unwanted In Wonderland. You may change a few things, but it's more than obvious that you're a little copy cat. Plagerism aside, have you noticed how awfully structured your paragraphs and dialogue are? Every single time someone speaks you should either indent and single space like a novel, or double space like most people on Mibba. You should also find someone to help you check your work, your typos are astounding. So, unless you sleep better knowing you're stealing someone else's earned popularity and respect as a writer, I believe you owe Ms. Fiego and your own "fans" an apology for being so ridiculously uncreative. You should also learn to form your own plot, original characters, and events. Good day.February 24th, 2009 at 06:26am
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I have only just finished reading the first chapter and I had to comment!
I love this!
That is all. :DFebruary 20th, 2009 at 07:20pm -
Oh wow... Who gets to her first?! Great update!! Ready for the next one!!February 16th, 2009 at 07:44pm
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:) waiting for update. OMG! Thats so crazy. Leny drowning. *gasp* :) lol. but yeah waiting for update! :)February 16th, 2009 at 06:44pm
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The story, I meant.
Oh the annual 50th comment! xDDDDFebruary 16th, 2009 at 04:56pm -
She's dead.
OMFG!!!
You have to put he song Helena by MCR in the next one!!!
It's aweosome. :DFebruary 16th, 2009 at 04:54pm -
Partey!
Dum, dum dum dumn!
Partey!!!! :DDDDFebruary 15th, 2009 at 12:41pm -
love it :]February 14th, 2009 at 09:05pm
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O MY GOD!!
I just started reading your story!
And I love it!!! XD
haha its so sad, I know I shouldn't be rooting for Zacky since he broke her heart and all but I can't help it
I can't wait to see what happens on their vaction!
More soon? Please??February 14th, 2009 at 06:55pm -
OMFG!!!!
I was totally listening to Leave Out All The Rest and reading the latest update!
It was so fitting it!!! :DDDDD
Like, when Zack thinks of killing, hitting Matt, the song went on with ''...when my time comes, forget the wrong that i've done, help me leave behind some reasons to be missed..."
Hahah, cool chapter! :DDDDDDFebruary 14th, 2009 at 12:57pm -
haha sorry
it's funny how brian rubs zacky's mistake in xp but i wonder how he's gonna play matchmaker...should be some entertaining stuff
oh and poor you, teeth are evil!February 14th, 2009 at 11:29am -
love it :]February 10th, 2009 at 09:48pm
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story's awesome but your author's notes are annoyingly long.. no offence but maybe a little less entering couldn't hurtFebruary 10th, 2009 at 06:11pm
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I liked it, although I find this totally ironic:
I was listening to I don't wanna miss a thing by Aerosmith while reading the update!
So she's Matty's now?? xDD
Lol.
Yay!
*runs around naked*
HahahhahahaFebruary 7th, 2009 at 10:46pm -
*new reader* OMG!! love it - although the speech gets confused 'cos you don't put a new speaker on a new line... You might wanna fix that before the editors get hold of your story, I don't know?
More soon??February 7th, 2009 at 01:58pm -
That update ROCKED!!! One of your best so far!!! Keep them coming!!!
BlairFebruary 7th, 2009 at 05:15am -
Love this :]February 6th, 2009 at 09:21pm
I lovve it! Waiting for update. :)