Winter Wakes - Comments

very original. Its good to see something that isn't recycled material from other mibba stories. Also, adding some humor in helped a lot. The character has attitude, which you easily portray. Very talented writer, and I can't see anything negative about the writing style, the story, the characters, anything. Keep this up!

I like the layout and I'm really into reading depressing stories, I have no idea why. I can say I won't subscribe because I'm really lazy, but I REALLY like this, it's very nice, very clear. I can relate to this in a way with her attitude.

OMG! I love this story!!! I'm from comment swap and to switch things up a bit I started on chapter nine and I am laughing my head off because I can picture everything perfectly. Simon is hularious screwing everything up for her. If all the chapters are like this, I will totally subscribe. but there were a few minor mistakes, such as seperating one sentence into two paragraphs. And I like the idea of putting a quote in the little notes section :) Great story.

Comments swap brought me to your story and I am so glad that it did. Your writing style is amazing, the way you describe things is perfect; you truly paint a picture with your words. And the plot is unique; something I have never read before or seen anywhere. You're a talented writer and I can't wait to read more :)

THIS is one of the BEST stories i have read in a while! Its SO GOOD! I thought this was a brilliant story and i hope you keep writing. Each character was so well described i could picture them in my head! This is really an amazing story! Keep up the good work! :D <3

Hello, Comment Swap brought me here and I am glad it did, I really am, I thought this was a brilliant read, as I read the story the characters came to life in my head, I am definitely going to recommend this and read the sequal!

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Very nice, your main character seems to be the type that keeps her head on straight in a tight situation, I like that a lot. This is the kind of story that a serious reader would like, the way you write and describe things goes very well with the development. The layout is really cool too. Keep it up!

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Well this is wholly depressing. I like the title; it looks like a play on words is…at play. The layout is a little disconcerting, too, although I think a more fluid one could really set the mood. You grabbed me right away with Dorian Grey—great pick. Maggie seems like a bit of a damper, but given her situation, I sympathize completely. This isn’t a completely original idea, but you've definitely put your spin on it, and I haven’t come across anything like it on mibba. Nicely done.

Comment swap. This has got to be the best original story I’ve found so far. I always start with the layout cos it’s the first thing I notice. And I really like it, I was attracted to the black background and the sort of gloomy and mysterious picture. Well I thought it was anyways. I’ve been reading a bit (there’s so many chapters to catch up on) and so far I actually really like it, consider me a sucker for your amazing way with words. =) >subscribed! x

I actually enjoyed this very much.
You have awesome writing, and the plot was really interesting.
I didn't find any mistakes big enough to point out, so I'm gonna move on.
And the layout, I loved(:

Original fiction! I kinda like it haha well, I love it!
It's such a pretty good story this far.
I'm just wondering about what happens next,
About what James would do.. Hm, I'm kinda curious, plase update soon! :)

Yay comment swap! I love it when I run into original fiction. I've read the first few chapters and a random one in the middle, and I think it's awesome. The concept of seeing ghosts isn't a new one, but you somehow put an original twist on it that makes it so interesting. You are also a talented writer, and that makes the story even better, since it's well written and fresh. I can already connect and feel for all your characters, and that's always a good thing. I like the layout alot, and the title change as well. Keep up the good work :)

The entire concept of this is wonderful to me. Right off the bat your characters are very clear. The idea of having her family own a funeral home and just being so practiced in offering condolences is something I've never read. Maggie knows she's not perfect, and Simon isn't perfect either which makes this realistically paranormal. This is really well written. =)

Well, I really adore the layout and the name of the story for starters.
There are some grammar mistakes but nothing too major.
The idea itself is really great, though not particularly my type of story, I still thought it was fairly good. And you write fairly well, but I found the story or style of it to be a tad plain. There was nothing about it that really grabbed my attention and held it. That's just me though. My attention isn't all that easy to keep anyhow. But, I wish you luck with your story. :)

This story is very well written with a good mixture of dialogue and description. I think your characterisation is also very good, as the main character comes across as very real and genuine. The plot also has me hooked - I haven't finished all of the story yet, but I certainly plan to.

You're story is very well written. I love the plot and everything. It really got me interested from the very beginning. You did a great job, with your ideas, and putting it all together. Overall, it was an excellent story. It kept me entertained throughout the whole story. I wanted to know more, and I was upset when I got to the ending. Lol. It was just amazing!(:

It seems interesting, but I just can't get interested in it. The chapters are written really well. At least the ones I read. Like I said earlier I just can't get into it. I just couldn't get interested in it. The idea sounds great and really good. I honestly like the idea, but I think it's just not my kind of story. Not my genre so to speak.

You start off strong, letting the reader get to know your character. And you follow through. It's really well written with minimal mistakes and an interesting plot. And your dialogue feels very natural. I've only read the first part of it as of right now, but I plan on getting caught up and I can't wait to see what you do next.

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Oh. My. Goodness. This is great. I love the layout. I love the story. I love the characters. I love everything about this. The summary is a bit lacking, but you completely make up for it in the actual story. I've only read the first two chapters, but I'm recommending and I shall continue reading.

I'm excited for the sequel (:

I've only read the two chapters so far and your an amazing writer. Will definitely be reading the rest of it. I've never read a story about someone who works in a funeral home before, so i like that your story is different. Anyways i'm off to read the rest of your story. :D