Uhm, yeah. What to say. I'm quite speechless for starters. Love the story, the plot and everything in-between. Yeah, I just read it through, from beginning to end during this night and couldn't, wouldn't want to stop reading. It got an end, and you could if you wanna make a second, but it's not necessary. Though I will miss your lovely characters. Will have to read rest of your stories, though I should sleep [having sports-holiday so I'm free from school but have homework to do later today actually...] You could try to write another story but in the same world? I don't want it to be really the end to tell the truth..
I had a dream once, now it's some years ago maybe, and I felt I should write a story about it. But I hoped I would dream about it once more, but never really did. Maybe I should just try and write from my memories. Though I'm not the best to take time to write... You did something great. Maybe you should make a book out of it? Like Twilight, only better... Hugs!
I hate that this is over, don't get me wrong, but I love how you freaked me out by him getting angry at her and not recognizing her and I'm like OBEJEEZUS!!! but it was all okay in the end.
Anywho, I'll stop rambling and go see what this "new obsession" is about...:)
I loved this story so much. :D Haha!!! I read the whole thing within a day... actually, probably within ten hours at LEAST! xD ...Then I figured out you actually finished the story and when I saw the words "THE END" I was heartbroken. rofl Every time I finish reading a good story, I always am left heartbroken because it's over and reading it again just isn't the same because you know what's going to happen. xP Maybe a sequel to this wonderful story? Maybe editing it and fixing up some stuff and getting it published as well? :P lol Yes, to me, this story is THAT worthy. xD It's not too often that I come across a story on mibba that's so well written that it could be published. Hahaha. I enjoyed this story so much! Now.... I've never been more bored in my life! D: In addition to the heartbroken feeling, I feel more bored as well because the adventure in my head is over and I don't know what to do next. xD Mom's calling me for dinner now, so I guess eating is what I'm gonna do next. lol
Oh, gosh. She 'thought' everything was going to be okay?
That one word has me worrying. And when I'm not swamped with school work, I will be fretting about it. But I'll be swamped because I have a huge report due in a week and a half that I haven't even touched and probably won't start until a week from today...or even the day before it's due...*cough*...
Anywho, I still effing love this story. Need I, once again, say that I am A-D-D-I-C-T-E-D to this story? Dani's indecisiveness about going back or staying should have been appeased the minute Andrew came in and said to follow her heart, because an adorable little kid saying that should have been irresistable!!!
Can't wait for the last bit, and sorry for my rambling. I love this soooo much and I'm sad it's coming to an end but I can't wait for the end at the same time...ugh. :)
She left?! but he was just SO sincere(spelling?) I hope that there will be some way to make it so her family and his family can be together in....Quillianna? because that's how it should be....well for me anyway Loved the new chapter and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Okay. I was crying. Is that bad for me to say? Of course, I have been REALLY sensitive lately...about every story I've been reading lately has a part that made me cry recently. lol. Anywho...I think she comes back. Just saying. And if she doesn't? I'll be bawling my eyes out unless Damien, Calvin, and Alistair come to her XD
Loved it, per usual! I can't wait to see how the ending turns out because I really want Dani to end up with'him' but I also want her to rejoin her family too....but it the magical fairy tale land not modern land.... Anyway, it was great! can't believe she's afraid of horses though....i personally love them and love to ride whenever I can but, hey, that's just me Update soon!
Anywho; 1) I am still seriously addicted to this and 2) I don't think Dani should go back. She belongs with Damien where they can have twelve kids named Bob, Joe, Louise, Damien Jr., Cal, Frankie (a girl), Janey, Jill, Jack, Harley, Riley, and Josef. (Just random names...sorry XD) And 3) I think Cal would miss her too much. The rest of her family should just be magicked to Quillania and that's that. So she can be with Damien.
Okay. For ONE: I am still reading this and for TWO: I will wait until your next update, as long as it doesn't take as long as like...Valentine's day. And even if it does take that long, I might need to re-read parts as a refresher, but I will still love it :)
And is she going to take Richard to see Roderick...? I'm kind of worried for Richard now. Unless, of course, he's just playing along. Which I don't think he is, but you never know. Anyway, I really love this and I wanna know what's happening next :)
Lol I find it hilarious that she met the king!!!! I don't get the emerald thing... But maybe that's just me being slow again!!! Lol or just tired... Idk... Update soon!! <333