There's No Such Thing as Magic…Right? - Comments

I can't wait till she starts the journey!!! I really love this story!!! It's great!!! You have to update more often =D

SHOWER!!!

I'm showering you with my comment!
I love it (still) even though I had to refresh my memory by re-reading the last sentence of the chapter before. And she IS able to do something! YAY!
XDDD
Can't wait to swee where you take this =3

THIS is where you're leaving me?! (us, really, if I include everyone else who's reading).

The mirror returns!!!

But if it IS the same one, how does she get back? Or is it a different one that she can get back through once she's done with whatever it is she needs to do? Hmm...

Can't wait for more! This story is really good!

I liked the new chapter very much, and I copied a few mistakes...not super-serious, and I left out the ones that could have used a comma, but here they are:
1) " 'I’m not gana buy that!' ” - I would suggest 'gonna' or 'gunna' because I've never seen it as 'gana'.

2) '...the most strangest thing...' - How about 'the strangest thing', because 'most strangest' is repetitive and grammatically incorrect.

3) '...in each petals...' - talking about the gold in the flower petals - how about 'in each of the petals' ?

4) “ 'I can control plants and their growth and manipulate the earth, I can create earthquakes, levitate and throw rocks and stones, I can create trenches, and cause avalanches.' ” - a bit of a run on. If it were me, I would have put something like, 'I can control plants and their growth. I can manipulate the earth; I can create earthquakes, levitate and throw rocks and stones, create trenches, and cause avalanches.' or SOMETHING =3

Over all, though, it was a fantastic chapter =3
Keep it up!
(And I hope you don't flunk xP)

I like it very much!
The chapter was good and I was happy to see that there were only a few grammer mistakes.....maybe like two....
the tension is buliding!

Like the new chapter =3
What on earth will he do to show her Magic is real...I wonder?
Cannot wait to see what happens next =3

Please write more

It seems you have some readers who comments here, but not enough. So here I am. :) Keep going on. I am curious about what happens the next after she ran out of the door.

Comments make you very happy, eh...?
Does that mean this'll make you happy enough to...update soon?
I'm addicted to this. Seriously. I can't wait to see where you take it!

Okay, so I made sure I remembered the typos from this chapter for you:
"At the beginning he reworded anyone..." REWARDED
"...like any other person who’s heart was filed with greed he..." WHOSE and FILLED and a comma between GREED and HE
"no one could afforded to buy anything anymore..." AFFORD, not AFFORDED.

Despite these few typos (all mostly toward the end, btw), I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see more!

Excellent! I love this. I found a few typos, but they weren't too distracting so I'm not going to mention them. Even if they were distracting, I didn't write them down so I could mention it anyway, so, yeah.
I love this so far, and I can't wait to see where you go with this!

i loves it. update. or i will comment so many times you'll never want a comment again.

I'm actually kinda addicted to this story.
So you really need to update it again.
'cause that would make me smile. :D

i can't wait for the ext update! i wonder how the grandfather will be...

Reread the whole thing and found a couple of spelling/ grammatical errors:
Chapter 1:
I threatened - needs a full stop.
about to punch, him - comma not needed.
Voila instead of Voalla.
You're in luck, instead of Your in luck...
Need to add in the comma in bold: I said, smiling angelically at him, "Come on Mike...
The above happens a few times - just check any time you have an I said followed by speech.
Captain instead of caption.
"I thought tidiness was your middle name?"
I'm more mature then that.
carried away instead of cared away.
puppy eyes instead of puppy eye.

Chapter 2:
Same comma thing again, but this time with the I said at the end of the speech - blah," I said.
Ellipsis a little more than halfway down the page needs one more full stop...

Chapter 3:
I’m not even a league one yet! Do you mean a legal teenager?

Chapter 4:
Blocks instead of blokes.

Chapter 5:
towards instead of toured.

Nothing for Chapter 6... Chapter 7:
Question mark after Where am I.

Watch your double spacing - some of it looks like three lots of enter key.
Also capitals - at the start of a new piece of speech, after any full stop etc.
And that problem with the commas before and after 'I said' crops up a lot.
Nice to see you changed some of the things I mentioned last time!
You're writing's improved a lot as well.

wow...brilliant! I love this! It is amazing and I am definitly going to subscribe!

Okies, reading here we go... Nice title & description btw. I likey.
Watch how many exclaimation marks you use though, they're kinda everywhere in those first few paragraphs.
bb code error: man they were ba lot!. plus you can get rid of that last full stop.
carried, not cared.
Don't do the 'flashback' 'end of flashback' thing. It's already explicit, and just patronises the reader. Put a flashback in italics instead, or just make it obvious through your language (e.g. change the tense).

2nd chapter:
tapped, not taped.
choose, not chose.
'there were a lot', not 'they were a lot'.
Don't overuse the phrase 'yes, I know'.
stacked, not staked.
'late for a reason' instead of 'late for reasons'.
heard, not hared.
Three full stops for an ellipsis... not..

Chapter 3:
Double space, not whatever this is. Like so:

To here.
'I had finally managed' makes more sense in this tense.
debts, not depts.
Drunkie? You must mean either 'druggie' or 'drunk'.
questions, not quotations.

General:
Reread your updates, as there are spelling mistakes which can easily be rectified. I might not have picked up on all of them, but there's a fair amount to change.
Try and fill out your writing a bit, it's kinda skeletal.
Plot is great, and it's nice that you haven't just burst straight into it.
Try not to be too informal, even though it's first person.

Keep writing this story, you're preety good at it.(:
I really like Danielle, she's funny, spontanious and very...interesting. I'd definately like to read more about her:)

UPDATE!
Damnit. O_O
*tackle hugss* LUVYEWWW!!!! =3

Love it so far!!! Keep it up!