August 2nd, 2010 at 05:17am
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I loved this chapter, and everyone else got to the errors, so that's all I have to say. This is a good story, very well written, which I appreciate. And, I understood his greatest desire, and I really like where you took it. I thought it would be the predictable, you know 'my deepest desire is you', but you gave it depth, and therefore gave Damien so much more believability.
I loved this chapter, and everyone else got to the errors, so that's all I have to say. This is a good story, very well written, which I appreciate. And, I understood his greatest desire, and I really like where you took it. I thought it would be the predictable, you know 'my deepest desire is you', but you gave it depth, and therefore gave Damien so much more believability.