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  • UrStorySucks

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    I'm only on Chapter 10 but I am so in love with this story. Rachel sounds a lot like me, I hope that doesn't sound weird lol. But I just wanted to tell you that I'm INSANELY in love with this story! it's like, I never want it to end haha. :] I'm subscribing to it.
    August 16th, 2009 at 06:14am
  • laureneva

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    Ok.
    so.
    i think my heart has just been ripped out of my chest right now. i'm resenting not reading this earlier, so i'm going to hunt down this subscription button and push it hard, possibly breaking a button on my laptop - because you're worth it.

    I don't just quote the loreal slogan for anyone. the raw emotion you caught in here is perfect, but i'm so worried that it's about to explode with shit and other bad things 'hitting the fan.'

    "My hands climbed up the newly exposed skin of her back and I can say it was softer than anything my raw nerves had ever felt."

    Is rachel really to blame here? You can't turn off love, and while there might not be a tree growing inside her; the roots are winding strong and forcefully around her heart. sooner or later, reality returns and reminds you of all those problems that being smitten can't mask.

    xoxo
    (hook me up for a chap 21 sneak peek bro)
    August 13th, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • buttaflykissz

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    oh man she dropped the L bomb wuts gon happenn nxtttttttttttttttttt?
    August 11th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    0.0 i love this story
    August 10th, 2009 at 03:10pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Oh my gods for three reasons.
    1) an update 2) the dirty, dirty 3) she spoke the all mighty L word

    I guess there is a fourth.
    Cliffhanger? Geez. Torture.
    August 10th, 2009 at 10:30am
  • secrets_and_lies

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    lol... good story ;) hehe
    xx
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:32pm
  • buttaflykissz

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    ohh man i feeel like theress a twist coming but yes im happy for rachel that everything turned out ok so far update soon!
    July 2nd, 2009 at 05:57pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Sweet content.
    July 2nd, 2009 at 09:57am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Oh geez!
    I'm eager for the next one.
    June 23rd, 2009 at 05:54am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    i love it!!! update sooooon!! =]
    June 21st, 2009 at 04:18pm
  • sunset of my sunrise

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    Loved the update! :) Can't wait for the next one :)
    June 19th, 2009 at 08:39pm
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    that was an AMAZING chapter..... really... i duno... just touching, i guess, lol. weird. Anyway yeah - really look forward to more :)
    June 14th, 2009 at 01:27am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    The last had me thinking about transgender again.
    It was awesome, but is Tristen going to remember?
    June 9th, 2009 at 05:28am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    omg.. i love this story.... your such a good writer!! Please update soon XD Love it!
    June 8th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • faye_92

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    awesome latest chapter... kinda sweet
    June 7th, 2009 at 02:07pm
  • PixieVampire

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    more please.

    i never got any e-mails about updates! *sniff*
    anyways, i got to read three updates at once!

    more please!
    May 27th, 2009 at 02:04pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Poor Rachel and her thoughts.

    I think Tristen was teasing her on purpose.
    May 26th, 2009 at 06:56am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    LOVED that update! Please update soon!! I hope they kiss soon!! Or SOMETHING! lol XD
    May 24th, 2009 at 12:29pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Awes!
    The latest, it was really sweet of Rachel for caring for her and stopping her from doing what she really, really, really should do.
    Hehehe.
    I love it.
    May 6th, 2009 at 09:21am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    The party is going to be good I take it?
    May 5th, 2009 at 07:20am
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