I pretty much just read that whole story and it was excellent. Heartbreaking And realistic. I like that, keep up the great work, I really like your writing.
Yeah, it probably would have been easier if she had just admitted to being gay, but where's the comedy in that? Anyway, I grow fonder and fonder with each wonderful chapter. I eagerly await your next update.
I really like this so far. A reason: My name is Rachel. Another reason: Her personality is great as is Jason's. Who doesn't love a perverted dude? Probably a lot of people, but I enjoy them. Haha.
My biggest problem with it, but it's minor and has nothing to do with your writing at all. I hate Rach. *cringes* When people call me that it makes me, obviously, cringe. I can get over it for this story!
I'm glad you're writing another story. It's been far too long. *hugs your fictional characters*
I am liking what I'm reading so far. This is very sweet. Rachel is such a great protagonist. Disastrous but realistically so. Someone easy to relate to. I've missed your writing, and I have a good feeling about this. *Subscribes*
Heyyy sorry i havent commented back - i couldnt find the 'message' or 'comment' part on your profile =/ But yeah its not problem ^^ I love this story so i have no problem commenting =[[
But yeah - Looooved the update XD Look forward to more :) x