Chicago City Lights - Comments

This story was amazing, drama romance, and of course Ben!! I loved it and was thrilled when there was an update! Great ending! I just noticed that this is in my sisters account so this comment is really from hockeychick1171!!

Even though I am a little sad that this story is over, the way you ended it was amazing. Drama and love together!!!!

When I first found your story, I wasn't sure if I was going to read it, because in all truth here, I didn't know who Ben Eager was. I am a die heart Penguins fan and would usually only read stories about them But after I googled him, and saw his picture lol I thought why not. I am soo glad that I decided to read it.
I can't wait you see what your next story will be about, I'm sure it will be just as amazing as this one is! :)

great story! sad to see it end

I loved this story and it made me love Ben too. Thanks to you I waited anxiously until he got resigned. Thanks for writing it. Can't wait to see what you write next.

oh Whatever. "best baseball team in chicago" ?!?!?!?The white sox suck. just kidding. hahahahahahha. no really though my family is like split in half and there are debates at every gathering. haha.

Im sad this is ending, although I loved the end. I love the way you write, and you made me fall in love with ben eager. not that it needed any help, but still =) Thanks!!!! Cant wait for more of your amazing writing!!!

Awww Lyss! I am going to miss this story it was truly amazing and down to earth! I loved reading this story !

Aw I can't believe this story is over I totally fell in love with Ben after reading this story I loved it. I loved everything about it especially the ending I'm going to miss this story.

I am so sad that this had to come to an end, but all good things must come to an end right? Damnit they do and I HATE that. So I have to admit... I'm slightly drugged up on pain killers from breaking my nose, so I'm going to reread it in the morning, but right now, I loved this chapter! I loved how you showed that Ben wasn't perfect, that he had a "dumbass" moment and that they were able to get over that.

It was awesome, much love!!

gosh i'm so sad this is over!
this was the story that made me want to write my ben fic!
thanks so much for writing it!
i absolutely loved it <33

i love this story it was amazing and i cant wait to read ur next story

Wow! I just read the hole thing today. This is an amazing story :)
Congratulations!

i loved that story. it was so amazing <3

i loved reading your series!
i couldnt wait for each and every chapter to come out.
it was one of my most anticipated story that i read.
thank you for making such an amazing-spectacular story.
a sequel would be just wonderful(:

*Le sigh*

I cannot believe this story is over =(

You know how much I love it, since I read the quizilla one multiple times. And then, I lucked out since you EXTENDED IT. But I got so attached to Ben and Evelyn it's going to be so sad to see them go. But at the same time, I want you to know that they're always going to be in my heart and head as well!

This chapter was sweet, even though Ben had a moron relapse. I liked the part of him giggling to himself, and then thinking he looked like a creeper giggling at his buger, lmfao! Oh, Ben. (And I was totally Troy Brouwer's girlfriend in that scene. Or at least, in my head I was.)

Even though I'm sad that this story ahs ended, I thought it was an absolutely perfect ending and I know you have so much more great stuff waiting to be written!

LUV U TAZERRRR!

Sincerely, Kaner <3

Aww, Lyss, I'm so going to miss this story.
I too have become attached to these characters and I have to say you wrote them so amazingly that I feel like I'm watching all of this happen instead of just reading about it.
You ended this story perfectly! <3

: D

Of course you had to end this with a bit of drama, didn't you Lyss? Gawd. Stupid move on Ben's part silly boy who is now all sappy and romantic off the ice hehe. But whatever... it's all good because it's a happy ending!

I'm not gonna lie, I laughed at the why he wasn’t one of those people who couldn’t eat when they were upset. part.

The end was adorable -- I like how in the start neither of them are from Chicago so it just makes sense that they would both be stoked to go to the Sears Tower. Very cute.

Your baby was very cute even though it threw some tantrums, it was a great baby overall =)

Excellent finish WIFEY! =)

Awww, it's sad to see this story ending! This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Seriously, you captivated me from the beginning, and you never failed to capture my attention with any of the chapters.

And that ending was absolutely perfect. I'm glad everything ended well for them after everything they've been through!

It'll be weird not to look forward to your updates of Ben. But, I'm sure you're going to have many more outstanding stories in the future!

I liked the ending :]

What a lovely ending, this was perfect Lyss.
I loved each and every chapter and I'm glad everything worked out in the end.