Chicago City Lights - Comments

I love this story. I remember first reading it on quizilla and I was so in awe at your writing ability. You actually sort of made me fall in love with Ben a little bit too as I continued reading this. I mean, obviously I'm a fail at commenting but I should have commented more because you deserve it.

This story is just amazing and I'm so sad to see it end.

“Ben, did you come here to talk to me or stare at me?”

He smiled sheepishly, “Both?”

Favorite. I love it. I can't get over how cute that is in my mind. Bah Lyss, this was such a good story and the ending was perfect.

Love you! :arms: And I shall miss this story<3

beautiful ending.

Thank you for introducing me to mr. ben eager! I'm only on chapter three but i'm commenting as i go b/c i am loving this story. That whole part with the wallet was too cute...what a story to tell the grandkids! Haha. I love reading your stuff b/c its so well written. Do you ever take requests for one shots? I'm sure you get alot of them though so don't worry if you don't/don't have time. I'm excited to keep reading and can't wait for your next duncan update either! I also noticed your love for brooks laich! That boy is seriously amazing. I just started writing a story with him in it...just trying to spread the love =) Ok. Epic post, but i promise i'm finished. Have a lovely thursday!!

Very good chapter. It's been a great story and I can'y believe that there is only one more chapter left.

amazing chapter!
i cant wait til the next one:D

amazing chapter!
i cant wait til the next one:D

I loved how Evelyn punched Ryan, haha. But, I'm sad that this story is ending. I can't wait to read the last chapter, though!

Sorry about not commenting, my computer hasn't been working that great lately. But I loved that part when Evelyn called Ben during his nap to come over and kill the bug in her apartment lol really funny.
Can't wait for the ending, even though I am sad its going to be over!!!! :)

Just wanted to say, even though I am a big Penguins fan, this story made me a Hawks fan as well. !!! How can you not like them!!!

S i havnt been on mibba in awhile, but when i saw your stor had been updated, i re-read the whole thing and i still LOOOOVVEE It! Im sad to see that it i ending soon, but its all right =) C ant wait for the ending!!!!

loved the new update! i misssed this story and there's only one chapter left? wth? haha.

anyways, i'm glad that ryan finally got punched! i thought he was just going to get away clean and unharmed. grrr, he made me angry. but ben was so adorable being all protective and sweet near the end. i love ben eager. <3

update soooon! (:

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Aw im sad this story only has 1 more chapter left im gonna miss it!

Yes! Ryan is finally out of the picture at long last. And Ben's met the parents, who obviously love him. What's not to like, right.
Ooh get Ben making Evelyn feel all beautiful, I m a fan of that.
I'm not a fan it's almost the end though...what?!

omgosh i am so sad that this story is almost over. it's my favorite hockey fic ever. it made me want to write my own ben eager story that i will be posting soon. loved it to pieces, babe. <33

Okay, so while I'm mildly disappointed that Ben didn't get all sexy and beat the shit out of Ryan, I am glad that Evelyn punched him in the face. Kudos to her.

I also like that Ben got like, instant approval from the parental units, haha!

And that last little sexy scene was absolutely adoreable.

*Sigh* Ben. I don't want this to ennnnnnnd. =(

Wow Ryan, epic fail right there.. The parents love Ben, you lose. I loved this chapter, Ben is just way too adorable for words. So sad there's only one left :[[

Dude that was so lame that Ryan called her parents. Um sorry buddy but that doesn't fly anymore... the parents can't do shit cause she loves Ben. I'm surprised and somewhat proud that Ben held his composure and didn't freak out on him like we all know he wanted to. Very nice. I liked the little moment with her dad when he saw that Ben was freaking out too. Cute. Evelyn and Ben are adorable together. =) Sooo this sucks that there is only one more chapter... but you have a bunch of epic stories on the go so it's all good. But it will be weird to see you not writing about Ben. Great stuff WIFEY! =)

Yes, peace the fuck out Ryan!
I love that Ben like instantly seemed to bond a little bit with Lyn's parents...too cute.
I'm sad this will be ending soon but I can't wait to read the last chapter! :]

Awwwww Ben!!!

Love this story
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