Chicago City Lights - Comments

this story desperately needs to be updated =]

omg this story is amazing
you are a wonderful writer
update soon!

Omzp!!!(o my Zach Parise and yes I'm that obssed I say that!) u need to update right now!

i've really never been that into sports fics, but i LOVE this story! keep up the good work, hun! <33

i'm positive i first read this story on quizilla haha, unless i'm really delusional. i absolutely loveLOVElove this story. please update! ben eager is loove.

OMG I hate centipedes, and theyre everywhere in Hawaii. Stupid ryan I hope he doesnt ruin everything!!! Thanks for the update, stil looooooooooving it =)

Ok, so I don't have a problem with this Ryan guy wanting her; people want things all the time, it's totally normal. But they don't always get them. So if he gets anywhere near to getting her, Ben has to deck him, yeah?

omg the centipede incident was so funny! and kaner so cute. ugh ryan needs to get his ass kicked by ben!!

Milwaukee sounds like fun! What are you guys planning to do there?

AWWW!! that was super cute! I can totally see Ben killing a spider for her.. but Ryan needs to go.. no one wants him there.. and hes such a creep..

Ahhhhh I hate ryan!!

Lol! The whole 'omg come over to kill this centipede' thing made me laugh. And it reminded me of my supervisor who hates nature. Anywho, they have a fun relationship -- joking around and stuff. It's good.

Kaner is adorable! *looks around..* Did I just say that out loud? Well he's adorable in your story. I liked how he challenged Ben haha. And he just scooped Evelyn up and left =]

And now how did this Ryan chap get into her apartment eh? Ben is totally gonna go angry hockey player on this dude's ass and it's going to be kind of entertaining. Oooh can he pick the guy up by his pants and shirt like he did to Bieksa and throw him down? Like he did during that brawl? That would be sweet.

Oh and great update =]

Okay, so I'm on Ben overload right now (not that I'm complaining!).

But, on to the update...I love how he had to come over to her place just to kill the centipede. But, I'm not going to lie, I'm the same way, haha.

And, I am so waiting on Ben to kick Ryan's ass! More soon???

awww Pt and Ben mmmm

Okay. This Ryan guy needs to get his ass kicked by Ben. I don't care if he's wimpy or whatever, but he should still get his butt kicked.

Because Ben kicking people's asses is HAWT.

Annnnyways.

That part with KANER was cute, lmfao!! I knew you loved him. Don't deny it.

AND I'M SO EXCITED FOR MILWAUKEEEEEE. Milwaukee-ans won't know what hit 'em!

LOVE YOU TAZERRR =)

i love this :]
can't wait for more because it just makes my heart melt!

It is so good so far. Did you happen to post something like this on quizilla?

ryan needs to get out of the picture asap!

the date was amazing chicago skyline....sex in the limo very hot!

loved the update totally worth waiting for!

That was so worth the wait! I'm glad you and Ben finally worked everything out =)

But, on to the chapter! The date around Chicago was so sweet. And the limo sex! Mmmm!

I can't wait for more!

:)
This story makes me happy xD

I agree with pretty much everyone else on this chapter =] Loved it!