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He didnt even notice the lingerie! Loved it anyways. Thanks for the update!!!

He didn't notice the underwear she bought, unless she's saving that for more sexy times. Or maybe he was just too preoccupied with the hot limo sex.
And Ryan has to go, now.

Ryan needs to go, he's not wanted.

Anyways, sex in the limo... wow. I started humming "no sex in the champagne room" when it was unfolding. Definitely hot. haha.

Yay for the simultaneous chapter 20 Ben updates, haha!

Limo sex, VERY NICE, hahah!

I'm worried about this Ryan guy though...I'm thinking Ben needs to kick some Ryan butt. =)

I loved their date though, and THEY SAID I LOVE YOU TO EACHOTHER! *Squeals*

Ugh, sooo good. NO TO THE WINDING DOWN OF THE STORY.

NO.

So yeah... I read fast and I'm reading like two things now and then I have Lynne's story to read too before going back to the story you say is awesome. But enough about that. This whole Ryan thing is gonna cause some problems I think. He just totally like dismissed it and didn't really care... like I would have like expected some more emotion I guess; but, that's just me. Their date was really cute. The whole limo thing was sweet. I still think it's early for the 'I love yous'; but, again, that's just me. Great stuff WIFEY! =]

OMG LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER!

Woah woah woah who this Ryan guy?! He is not going to walk in here and take her away it's ben!!!!

i love the new chapter. its so suspenseful!!! i can't wait to see what happens with ryan, he better stay away because ben and her are soooo cute together lol

not cool. i want another update soon :)

:O Nooooo. No Ryan. Get rid. For me ?? :D

That did not suck.

But Ryan? Nooo.

She has to be with Ben, not least because the sex is incredible, haha!

I can't wait for their date, and for Ryan to get out of the picture

Well I guess a month is a little early to say you love someone. So I understand her there. Ben is so sweet sending her flowers. And who does this Ryan guy think he is coming all back into her life after he was an ass. I'm curious to see what Ben thinks about this -- or will she tell him? Their date should be good! Oh her parents. Great stuff lady!

Ryan Ryan!! Did I miss something

what are you talking about that it sucked? it was the total opposite!!

the flowers were so sweet but not the ones from ryan! is he going to be back in the picture?!?!

im excited for their date! update soon.

didn't even suck so shhhh.

drama, drama!

"Not yet, but I could.” ---> Ummm WTF is that??? DAMN STRAIGHT SHE LOVES HIM.

NOW. She loves him NOW.

And Ryan confusion, ugh. Whatever, Ben is better than him anyway.

I'm excited for their V-DAY date!!

And, the parents are gonna have to suck it up and deal with Ben. So there.

Loved it!!

*Cough*Burishnext*cough*

That wasn't a kindamaybe cliffhanger! That was definitely an actual cliffhanger!! And, even though you made us wait forever for it, I still loved it!

And, I'm interested in knowing why Ryan's sending her flowers, and what Ben's going to do about it!

You better update a lot sooner next time, haha!

So I know I've commented you on this chapter before, but I was working on my Ben story when I thought of sometthing.

So, I re-read your chapter just to be sure, and sure enough, Ben didn't use a condom here either.

Evelyn could be pregnant you know. =))) hahahahah I know how much you love that idea.

i love this story i just subscribed. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

ben eager, i love him.
--well i do now. lol