April 26th, 2009 at 01:31am
Chicago City Lights - Comments
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holy that chapter was hot and steamy! i can sense some drama soon I can't wait maybe some more steamy scenes in the future!April 25th, 2009 at 08:26pm
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New reader. : D
gotta say, being a Minnesotan and all, chapter nine made me grin.April 25th, 2009 at 07:09am -
Wow! That was hot! And, now I'm wondering why you brought up Ryan. Is he going to come back into her life again or something??? You need to update again really soon!!April 25th, 2009 at 06:59am
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Nothing like some steaminess after a run out in the coolness. That's so cute that he has valentine's day plans. So I read this then got distracted and kinda forgot what I read - I'm bad I know, *smacks hand* but it's not my fault =P - so I re-read and it was lovely. All steamy and they are all cute together. You're gonna add drama soon I know it. Cause you are encouraging me to write drama. Don't mess things up too badly. They need some happy times after the whole thing they just got over. Mmm kay? More soon! <3April 25th, 2009 at 06:54am
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Jesus Christ woman! That was freakin STEAMY. I know I told you my chapter would be too, but mine is still PG-13.
I think.
OMFG though, you know I loved it. My jaw freaking dropped, haha. And since you and I are like the same person, you know that's not an easy feat.
*Fans self*
You're amazing. I love this story. DON'T EVER END IT.
And, that Ryan douchebag better not come back, I know you have drama up your sleeve. *Does the "I'm watching you" gesture*April 25th, 2009 at 06:30am -
MORE!!
=]
Please? :PApril 22nd, 2009 at 07:56am -
i like the new layout! update soon!April 21st, 2009 at 09:35pm
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I really like your new layout.April 21st, 2009 at 01:55pm
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LOVE the story!!! Keep updating!April 21st, 2009 at 08:12am
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Oh Kaner. For some reason I think that he and Evelyn are gonna become BFFs (don't ask me why, I just have that feeling). So they are pretty cute together, Ben and Evelyn that is. I can't imagine going through all those injuries -- I feel so bad for him knowing that he actually dealt with that. He's one tough doood. Great update my dear =)April 21st, 2009 at 07:10am
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i love it i cant wait for the next partApril 21st, 2009 at 06:49am
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love it! keep the updates coming!April 21st, 2009 at 06:20am
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Awesome story! :)April 21st, 2009 at 06:06am
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I love the new layout! And, the chapter, of course. And, it's even sadder when you know that all these things happened to him. I remember when it was all happening and everyone was trying to figure out why we got him. But, now it's obvious that he's an asset to the team! Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter and for new Burish!!April 21st, 2009 at 05:48am
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1. LOVE the layout.
2. YES BURISH PLEASE
3. Whoever reads both our Ben stories got a double dose of depressingness today, haha
4. AWE KANER!! So cuuuute!
5. WHY DID EVELYN TURN DOWN EAGER SEX??April 21st, 2009 at 05:45am -
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! BUT YOU KNOW I DO! AND I LOVE EVERY STORY YOU WRITE TELL ME WHEN U UPDATE THE NEW ONE :)April 21st, 2009 at 05:43am
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loved it! as usually :)April 18th, 2009 at 02:45pm
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loved it, i am very glad they are together!!!April 17th, 2009 at 06:27am
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Yay. It's great to see them officially together. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.April 16th, 2009 at 12:56am
I love it.
I love Ben, like I was saying to Lynne earlier, he's like a teddy bear but sexier. Oh, so much sexier.
And that last chapter was really rather hot. Me = fan.
But what's with this Ryan guy? He'd better not come in and ruin it all.
But I love this, and I'm pretty sure that more is needed ASAP!