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  • westcoastwinter

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    Finally! Some good things for the two of them!

    I can't wait for more!
    April 15th, 2009 at 02:46pm
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    Oh. Em. Gee. *squee*
    I just about love you right now ^_^
    April 15th, 2009 at 01:11pm
  • roxy278

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    they are so cute together! keep on writing!
    April 15th, 2009 at 08:53am
  • manny99

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    I love it can't wait for the next part
    April 15th, 2009 at 08:11am
  • broken sticks

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    Awww they are all together and all happy now. Yay. How cute that they matched. Lol about Ben not knowing she kissed him when he was asleep. They are adorable. Good on James to realize that he shouldn't force something that won't work. So cute. Happy times all around - yay. =D
    April 15th, 2009 at 08:01am
  • lynne1988

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    OH AND I FORGOT!!

    Wiz, is a STUD.

    mmm, sweaty James Wisniewski, being all considerate.
    April 15th, 2009 at 07:56am
  • mully17

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    THEY FINALLY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay
    April 15th, 2009 at 07:55am
  • lynne1988

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    OMG, I think I succeeded at our mission!! hahaha

    Ben in a suit, YUM.

    AND THEIR FIRST CONSCIOUS KISS TOGETHER!!! Yesssssss

    And they're together!

    *sigh* Life is good.
    April 15th, 2009 at 07:54am
  • AlissaRose89

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:39pm
  • Ltsghwks

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    Aww, they are going to a wedding together. Also, the awkard scene with Sharp was quite amusing.
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:25am
  • mully17

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    YOU Could have told me about it!! That you changed it from quizilla!! Ahh waht am i missing!
    April 12th, 2009 at 10:37am
  • kelceyarmstrong

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    Love it!
    I can't wait to see what happens!! Nice twist with Katie!
    April 12th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • broken sticks

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    You got that awkward moment down pat haha -- that being the whole PSharp and Evelyn thing. I can just see that being uber awkward and him being all like 'must not look'. It's good that she let him explain the situation. But really it's kinda crazy how she like freaked out about the girl when she just slept with his teammate. But I digress. Great update and I hope the drama dies down for a bit =)
    April 12th, 2009 at 12:50am
  • Cat Attack!

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    Ahh I love this story! Update plz :D
    April 11th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    Oh, thank god, everything's good again!!

    And, Sharpie having to take her clothes off of her! Hilarious!!

    I can't wait for more!
    April 11th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • lynne1988

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    YOU FIXED IT!!!! =))))

    I can just imagine Patrick Sharp feeling so awkward, hahahahahaha

    Hahah, and okay, I'm glad things are good, for now, anyways.

    Update soon anyways!!
    April 11th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • Kupo

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    This story is a-freaking-mazing. :)))
    Update soon XD
    April 11th, 2009 at 03:24pm
  • gurlygirl87

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    Oh my, what has he done!!! loll Loved it.
    I hope they can work things out!
    April 11th, 2009 at 02:03pm
  • Diiamondz

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    Okayy... I'm gonna be butally honest here... there's one thing I really didn't like about this chapter... but I can't say I hated it because I don't know what's going to happen next... but I REALLY don't like it when a girl sees another girl in a guys apartment and runs off. Basically because I really dislike people who jump to conclusions without evidence or reasoning. Sorry, just had to get that out of my system. Other than that one more awesome chapter (Y) ;P
    April 11th, 2009 at 12:11pm
  • broken sticks

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    Like I just told you aw hell no you didn't. These two are frustrating. They started beating around the bush and now they can't stop cause Evelyn and Wiz and now Ben and this chick. Dang it. I'm frustrated for them but that's what makes this an epic story. That chick better not start shit with Evelyn. Gosh. Great update! =D
    April 11th, 2009 at 09:45am
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