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  • Ltsghwks

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    I'm absolutely lovin this. I can't wait to read who the mystery girl is.
    April 11th, 2009 at 08:06am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Noooo....it was all going good until that damn girl walked out of his bedroom!

    Please, tell me there's going to be some good reason for her, or if there isn't that Evelyn will forgive him!

    Update SOON!!!
    April 11th, 2009 at 07:44am
  • lynne1988

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    Oh my fucking God.

    Benjamin, WTF?

    Lyss, WTF??

    Well, at least they know they want eachother, haha.

    FIX IT SOON.
    April 11th, 2009 at 07:39am
  • roxy278

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    omg every chapter this story is getting better and better! update really soon please! lol.
    April 11th, 2009 at 07:35am
  • roxy278

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    how long are you planning to make this story?
    April 10th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • kelceyarmstrong

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    I love your story!!! I just started reading it tonight! Keep updating! I can't wait to see what is going to happen :)
    April 9th, 2009 at 11:18pm
  • gurlygirl87

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    I am glad she is going to Bens!! I hope it turns out well :)
    April 9th, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • manny99

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    I love this story please updated I can't wait for the next part
    April 9th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • roxy278

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    i love this story! update soon please!
    April 9th, 2009 at 06:55pm
  • Lagerfeld's Muse

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    Ahhh! I have to know what happens next!
    April 9th, 2009 at 03:09pm
  • lynne1988

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    OH MY GOD...She's going to Ben's???

    Wow, that should be interesting.

    And you're right, I'm not that mad at Wiz =)
    April 9th, 2009 at 06:03am
  • broken sticks

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    Damn you can't leave it there... that's gonna be one awkward conversation between Evelyn and Ben. Oh she should have stopped things though... rather than uh, going through the motions eh? But great update... you've certainly stirred stuff up =P
    April 9th, 2009 at 05:45am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Oh. My. God. Seriously, I'm in a state of shock right now! I can't believe she slept with Wiz. And, what's she going to say to Ben?? You can't just stop there! I need more!!
    April 9th, 2009 at 05:43am
  • Diiamondz

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    NOOOOOOOOOO I need to scream o_0 That chapter nearly killed me x_x Repair this thing ASAP! >;]
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:01pm
  • gurlygirl87

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    Loved it...
    awww poor Ben. Once he sees Evelyn with Wiz he will want her back lol
    can't wait for more!!
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:54am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Nooo, she can't go out with Wiz! But, I'm looking forward to seeing how Ben reacts when he finds out that Evelyn and Wiz are going out!
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:44am
  • lynne1988

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    Ugh, this version is so much more depressing than the quizilla one.

    But you know I loved it =)

    Ben WAS hot when he yelled, even if it was AT Evelyn.

    And WIZ, way to be opportunistic. I hope he doesn't become a bad guy!!!!!!
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:41am
  • broken sticks

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    Aw dang he doesn't realize what he just did there, did he? Dang it Ben. This little outing between Evelyn and Wiz should be interesting. But, you still need to make things better... =) Great update though!
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:39am
  • akhockey2210

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    I'm only on Chapter 2! but, I love it so far:]
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:29am
  • Ltsghwks

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    I read this story when it was on Quizilla. I love the new chapters you've added to it.
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:05am
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