Sonata - Comments

hahaha, oli's scared to drive xD

at first I didn't get why he was so scared, I was like 'huh? what's going on? did I miss something?'
but then I realized it was because he didn't want to drive and I was reliefed :D

great chapter....even though I still don't like corey...he seems...off

I liked the update. I'm excited to read the rest of this story.

I looove how the updates are starting to come a little sooner. :D I had almost forgotten about this story.

is it wierd to say that I'm SUPERRRRRRRRRRRR sstoked for the next chapters?

well what I liked about this one is that you, liek you said, was some kind of a teaser, I'm SO exited or what's to come next...

and I so can imgaine the boys being scared of the cops, even if it's only fiction...I just can xD

and I certainly did NOT unsubscribe...I would never do that especially not to this story!

Well this changes things...

I sort of feel bad for her, the part about her dad being more focused on his job than his own blood. That's pretty shitty.

I love love love how you have her directly naratting now. I'm curious to see how this will all result, the bad things I mean. I never even thought about how they would feel running from the law basically every day of their lives.
Gotta love a tragic hero.

I also wish that I had mad commenting skills like you do. It's not something that I've mastered yet. But you already know how much I love your stories, I'm not sure that I could actually put it in a comment anyway.
And even though it was short and you weren't super fond of it in the twitter world I really think that it's one of the most important chapters. It really lets us know what kind of a girl she is, and her true feelings.

Damn my friend. Just DAMN

Can't wait for the next update!!

So stoked you updated this. :)
It's been sooo long.
I really liked this chapter.
We saw a different side of Eve, which was cool.

Could we possibly get an Immersion update soon? :D <3

oooo
i'm excited for whatever is going to happen

I have a reallx bad feeling about corey...

is he going to be one of the group now? maybe he's a spy and that's his job to do...

okay I'm just assuming, because that was the first thing that came to my head after this chapter...

and only 8 chapters? that's ssad T.T

Oh hello there, best story on mibba.

oli look alike?
can't say i saw that coming.

can't wait for the next update,
i keep pondering where this is going but i'm pretty much clueless.

...looks just like him eh? like exactly?
because I'm having thoughts over here, and I enjoy them greatly. I cant wait to see what you have in that genius brain of yours.

Seriously I can imagine how slutty the sluts can get, and the fact that Curtis got to be the one to call her out made my day. And the fact that she liked the "drummer", we all know he's mine first of all...not like she got the right one anyway. If you're gonna be a skankwad then at least do it right. Dumb hoe

You really need to stop pimping me haha, though I do love it. Nearly as much as i love you, which is a hell of alot after reading this <3

This new engagement, however, had me wondering if there was a possibility that their mom and dad couldn't handle the idea of two Olivers, shipped Corey to a foster family, and found Tom somewhere in the process.

Amazing, I couldn’t not quote that, though I probably should quit quoting when commenting a story.

Anyway. I was stifling my laughter throughout that entire chapter (I laugh a bit too much), but I finally lost it at the last line. My stomach is freaking killing me.

I just wish you had like a whole catalogue of stories. I will NEVER tire of your writing, of that I am sure.

Ive only read the first chapter so far but WOW!! i love it...its so descriptiveand just...wow...

amazing...

I'm sorry, but I am absolutely positive you are legitimately incapable of writing a bad chapter.

And good Lord, that picture of Tom is, by far, the best.

"Tonight, he was Tom Sykes; the angry parent.
And he wasn't backing down."

That made me giggle. Haha.

Great update.
Is Immersion next? :D

Useless? What are smoking? I need to know so I can be sure to deny it if ever offered. haha On a less offensive note that banner is too beautiful for words.

's no New York. No New Y..ork. I wan' the mafia, an' th-they give meh go'damn... YUPPIES!!
D: Drunken Matt is my new favorite thing.

& I feel like an idiot. I didn’t realize he had licked her until it was typed out for me to see. I’ll just blame the fact I jut got up.

Also, the picture of Tom. I'm not even going there. But I will say this, damn it’s hot in here.

this chapter was fun...well for me.... I really had to laugh at that

Oli wasn't dating himself I don't know why but it'd be funny if it was like this xD

and this is most likely a thing that only a drunk person would say :D

Yeh...yeh know wha's wrong wi-ff Florida?
's no New York. No New Y..ork. I wan' the mafia, an' th-they give meh go'damn... YUPPIES!!

I liked the chapter even though it was filler-ish

and the new picture for to is...well to put it correctly: hot period.
and it doesn't happen very often that I think pictures of him are hot no they look cute to me most of the time..but this is woha...
okaaay I should stop rambling about a picture of tom s. xD

You're right, it was fillerish. But you have a weird ability to make even that seem like the best thing I've ever read. I don't know how, but you always slightly piss me off with the fact that you're amazing lol.

Tom being a light weight I can see, and Matt acting exactly like that when he's drunk I can definitley see. I love his random talking.

"Because, the back way is the front way before the show starts." took me a good few minutes to comprehend what that was trying to say. I was about to bust out a diagram, blame the lack of proper sleep.

But I, as I say every time, loved everything about this update. You're shit shiz, blah blah blah, you've heard it all.

damn, The first chapter made me cry.

So what, I'm weak, okay?

I cryed alot. haha I'm such a baby. I'm not looking forward to the story though. I dont want to cry anymore.

But I am going to read it. because I want to know what is happening.

Addicting story(: