Hemorrhage. - Comments

I'm so, so sad this is over.
I love the ending, because I feel like it's the perfect closure, but still. It's a bitter-sweet feeling to see an absolutely amazing story come to an end. It's extremely well written, and I'm going to miss it too much for words.

Your writing style is brilliant. This was such an amazing story.

Kaylie, I don't know what to do with myself now that this story is over. Except maybe die from waiting for this G-rizz one that you are teasing me with.
This is fucking phenomenal. I don't have the words, really, because even that doesn't cover it. And they finally are macking and happy and lovely and ughhh it's wondrous.
I also love that you have Molly and Kman all cute. Even though it's gonna kill me to wait/try to figure out how things turned from she hates him to they're macking (and thank god they eventually mack!).
I don't know what else to say, really. I love you, I love this, and I'm going to miss it terribly.
Lots of love, m'dear. I'm very glad you never deleted this (:

I don't even know what to say.
Really. This was just incredible.

Beautifully written story. Can't wait to see what you do next

man, i am so sad it's over. this story was amazing because to me it was about real issues and it was easy to relate to. maybe not to the extreme of relating to having anorexia, but having body image issues. i think this story had a great message: love yourself, no matter what. i think a lot of girls today need to hear that everyday because the media is completely distorting what 'beautiful' is. this story really captured true beauty. thank you so much! :)

flawless.

Aw, that was the perfect ending!
I loved it :)

I would be lying if I said I didn't tear up while reading this last chapter.
Because I did.
This entire story was amazing and definitely one of the best ones I have ever read.
I am really going to miss it.

I love how you write. I loved the entirety of this story that is Emilie.
Everything about this made me feel something deeper than if somebody else was telling it.
Well, if it was still fictional it is.

Great job! :)

(ALSO, HOLY CRAP I SAW MY NAME IN THIS!)

I'm in love with this. You're a really great writer.

this is honestly one of the best stories i've read on here, i loved every moment of it.
I'm sad that it's over, but glad that everything ended well.

That was great.
Seriously, this was the best. :)

Now we know that Kenny and Molly get back together. ;)

im sad that its almost over, BUT so very happy that she is getting better!! :D
i LOVE this story!

I am glad that she is better but unamused that this is ending.
Oh well, it was a great, long run, and I loved every moment of it.
And I'll love the last parts too :)

Reading this, I'm like half smiling and wanting to cry because its almost over and Emilie has made so much progress and I don't want it to be over.

I caaaan't believe it's almost over. One chapter left? :(
That was fantastic, the way you summed up her months in the clinic, especially when she relapsed around Thanksgiving, you just made it so real.
And omg, this: I started the second John had looked at me, his eyes so sad, and said, “You were always beautiful.”
Adorable. I died a little, I swear you just idek.

AND HEY, DO WE EVER FIND OUT ABOUT KENNEDY AND MOLLY? BECAUSE I AM ROOTING FOR THEM.

shes recovered!!
update soon!!

I'm so happy that she's recovered! But I'm sad to see thsi end :[
Can't wait to read the ending :]

It seems like I went to university and all subscription emails for everything stopped, so I've been catching up since chapter nineteen or something. I have to say, the way you've written this is amazing. You're not promoting eating disorders or anything like that, but showing the negative effect it can have on a person and the relationships they have with those around them. This is the best story I've seen that has included eating disorder content on here. Especially since it's not just about the physical effects, it's the emotional and mental too, and the way you've put that across is really good.

I was surprised with John's reaction to Emelie's letter. I know throughout the story, he's never really acknowledged the fact that she's seriously ill, he's never made a drama about it, but to find out he's the cause had to crush him. At the same time, the way he wouldn't take the blame was just, ack, I wanted to slap him. He's so blind and it's as though he's rather brush it all under the carpet and ignore what's happening. But I love Molly, and how she's managed to inject some of her own confidence into Emelie and force her to see what she needs to do. I'm happy that she found the strength to finally admit what had caused her illness, and tell John why it all happened, and she's on the road to recovery. I've loved reading this, and I'm sad that it's ending, but I hope it'll be a happy one. They all deserve it. (:

Here's what next chapter needs to be:
Emelie: HEY MOLLY, K-MAN, GET TO YO' MACKING.
Molly & K-man: Okay *macking ensues*
Emelie: AYYY J-DOG, ILY LOTS BOY, LET'S GO SEX IT UP.
J-dog: Hells yeah! *macking ensues*
Pat: I'mma go beat myself up about being a dickhead.
Everyone else: YEAH, SUCK ON THAT PAT, YO' SO MEAN.
*more macking ensues*

ILY.