This, Is Getting Over You - Comments

  • Chemical Heart.

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    xxBellaxMuertexx:
    Please update?!
    It's coming. I'm not writing this chapter, so I don't know how much longer we'll all have to wait. Hopefully it won't be very long though, and well worth the wait. :)
    March 24th, 2008 at 04:24am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Please update?!
    March 24th, 2008 at 04:10am
  • Fake your own death

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    Thanks for finally updating, Chelsea.
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    I can't wait for Chels update. It's gonna be so good. Oh, and Die, you should probably spell check or proofread, there were a lot of mistakes in your last update. :)
    Thanks for notifying me in public. I can't wait to read your next review! :D

    And thank you to all you peeps who are reading! I love writing this so I hope you love reading it. DW I will update soon!
    Oh you're so welcome! As an editor, it's best that I point these things out. I am glad you appreciated it :D
    And as usual and expected, Chels chapter was a perfect display of her writing talent. The emotion and language was like poetry in summer. She truly is a talented writer. =D
    March 22nd, 2008 at 04:28am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Thanks for finally updating, Chelsea.
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    I can't wait for Chels update. It's gonna be so good. Oh, and Die, you should probably spell check or proofread, there were a lot of mistakes in your last update. :)
    Thanks for notifying me in public. I can't wait to read your next review! :D

    And thank you to all you peeps who are reading! I love writing this so I hope you love reading it. DW I will update soon!
    March 18th, 2008 at 09:05am
  • bbygrindcore

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    ah-mazing [:
    March 5th, 2008 at 08:54pm
  • Bree.Kiana

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    I <3 this story! and it took me FOREVER to get through! great job!
    March 5th, 2008 at 08:14pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    Gah, I don't understand why they have to be so mean.
    I had tears in my eye's reading that.
    March 5th, 2008 at 08:58am
  • Ghost.

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    Wow... That was amazing... Well worth the wait. =]
    I love the description of the bus drivers and his area, Also how you've written the last part right before they go on stage. I'd be interested to know what my chem think of all this though... =P

    fuck me... this is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read. My love for it is... beyond words. Fantastic writing. =]
    March 4th, 2008 at 12:23pm
  • Saint Gut-Free

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    Blahhh.
    I love Del. And I feel for her so bad.

    This story is amazing.
    Seriously.
    It's beyond words.

    More!<3
    March 4th, 2008 at 09:14am
  • we are invincible.

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    Hmm.
    I loved this chapter, it was not crappy.

    Srsly, you are really making me hate the rest of the band.
    Even though I do feel sorry for them becuase I think they have a point.
    March 4th, 2008 at 06:59am
  • Billie Joe_Malfoy

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    That was so not a crappy chapter. It was amazing as usual. I really can't wait till your next update.
    March 4th, 2008 at 02:18am
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    woah....holy friggin shit...Swoon
    they really should've stopped pushing Del.....Sad
    gah, what's she going to do now?...Cry
    March 4th, 2008 at 12:48am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Awww.
    No..
    Please update soon.....
    March 3rd, 2008 at 11:43pm
  • Break Me Down x3

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    Wow.
    The wait was killing me.
    This update was just plain amazing.
    I seriously can't wait for more.
    This is an incredible story.
    March 3rd, 2008 at 10:56pm
  • Rossetta

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    WOW. I LOVE THE DESCRIPTION OF THE BUS DRIVER!
    I ACTUALLY LIKE THIS CHAPTER!
    KEPP IT UP LOVE!
    UPDATE SOON!
    March 3rd, 2008 at 05:09pm
  • Bad Luck.

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    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I screamed when I got the e-mail. Seriously, how they were going to get out of the stall was killing me. But I think that the way they got out of the stall was handled quite nicely.

    “So Del, where’s Gerard?” A snarl came from behind me. I turned to see John, sitting comfortably between Josh and Vinnie. Each one of them staring at me, they hated me.

    Gahhhhh. This chapter has got me hating John, Josh and Vinnie. Seriously, why can't they just listen to her! This chapter had me fighting myself at the computer chair. A bit of screaming involved also. I'm not kidding.

    The bus driver was pretty hilarious too. And the part about the gun on he floor... that was REALLY creepy. I mean, really, REALLY creepy. But then again, if I were Del then I'd rather sleep there than with the rest of the band. Grrr.

    “I want ter go there one day, y’know? Be nice it would.” He started the engine of the bus, pulling out of park and into first gear. This was going to be a long trip.

    I might sound weird, but I love the way you wrote his accent. I mean... I'm weird about that. But I really liked it. :mrgreen:

    “What’s it going to be?” John was speaking. “A man who fucks you up, or us... your friends? Because you’re sure as hell, fucking up any chances of us making it in this fucking business!” I was on the verge of losing any restraint I had on myself.

    “ Friends don’t ask you to choose.” Tears were stinging at my eyes, begging to escape as my body trembled with anger. How could they ask that, they were out of line, they had no right.


    Ack NOOOOO wtf why are they making her choose?! I hate them again. She shouldn't have to choose. She's right, they have no right. Noooo, she can't choose over Gerard and her friends. It's not fair! Not fair, I say!

    Gahhh, I looooved this chapter. Even though I'm mad at Del's friends. Yeah. Nice update.
    March 3rd, 2008 at 04:12pm
  • Chemical Heart.

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    I'm sorry I made you all wait on me. I had major writers block for quite a few months (it even got as far as a long conversation with a friend over msn about how bad I was feeling over it.)

    So, I hope the chapter will have done some justice to Del, and Die's last two chapters. >.<
    March 3rd, 2008 at 03:47pm
  • Fake your own death

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    I can't wait for Chels update. It's gonna be so good. Oh, and Die, you should probably spell check or proofread, there were a lot of mistakes in your last update. :)
    March 2nd, 2008 at 04:57am
  • Chemical Heart.

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    It's on it's way. I've almost finished. Wow

    Hang tight!
    January 27th, 2008 at 02:11pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    k so, I know I prmoised to make an update. But my co-author came back and said she was gonna make an update but idk what's really going on...so ya, if you read this, hang tight, if my co-author doesn't inform me I'll update. So, ya, worry about my update, byt don't worry about updates! :D
    January 27th, 2008 at 11:57am