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  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Hey...if anyone's reading thing. :shifty I just thought of what's gonna happen in the next chapter and I'm kinda excited to write it; its going to be a silly kinda chapter. So, I'll be writing it within the next few days. In my mind I'm saying tomorrow, but who knows how many days that means. :lol: When I mean silly chapter, I mean a fun one, it won't be all gloomy and stuff. :D
    January 15th, 2008 at 05:36pm
  • Rossetta

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    OH MY FN GOD!!
    THIS WAS AMAZING!!
    WONDERFUL JOB!
    PLEASE KEEP THIS STORY GOING!

    WHY CAN'T THEY STOP FIGHTING IT AND ADMIT THEY LOVE EACHO THER??
    January 15th, 2008 at 01:00am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Thank you all for the comments. In Love

    Right now I'm trying tothink of what should happen next..I'm going to make it the god damn chapter ever. :x But how...is the question. :think:
    January 6th, 2008 at 07:36pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    Awesome update!
    Great lenght too, and lots of detail!
    Can't wait to read more!
    January 6th, 2008 at 03:56pm
  • Saint Gut-Free

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    HAHAHAHAH
    That's so freaking funny. Everyone's gonna find them locked in the cubicle together.

    God, you write so well. It's amazing.
    You must update this soon =]]
    <333333333333
    January 6th, 2008 at 03:08pm
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    i loved it!!!!!! hmm..what to do while trapped inside a cubicle with Gerard...Naughty :tehe:
    i liked the intensity of the words though, it was aweome! Smiley
    January 6th, 2008 at 01:24pm
  • Ghost.

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    My god! You are far to humble for your own good Die!
    That was, i would say close on my favourite chapter so far... Amazing.
    You both never cease to impress me, really.
    This is actually one of my favourite stories on Mibba. I do wish you would udate more though. =P

    Anyway... the out come of them being stuck together should be pretty funny. xD
    I can jsut imagine what Emma will have to say. Unless they jump over the cubicle... depending i guess. xD

    More ASAP please! =]
    January 5th, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    omg. Swoon THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!!1111111 It just makes me feel so ...happy. I'm like :mrgreen: and :cheese: and In Love all at once!

    THANK YOU ALL!

    Sorry about the typos...Chel's normally the one who edits 'cause I hate reading my own stuff. ._. Although, if I did go back and edit it, it would have been better. :lol:
    January 5th, 2008 at 12:36pm
  • we are invincible.

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    I love it.
    SO much.

    It made me giggle.
    "I can also smell how close we are to bogans," John said.

    God, they are screwed. Emma's gonna go apeshit.
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:57am
  • helen

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    Sucked? You're too humble.
    It was GREAT.
    It made me sad, then made me smile, than made m worried and cracked me up in the end.
    I'm still laughing.
    And yeah, like Billie Joe_Way stated, this is definitely one of my favourite stories on Mibba. Your writing is Swoon Seriously. You shouldn't underestimate yourself.
    The story doesn't lack originality (regarding the plot) and it's very very very good written. And it has LOTS of drama. It's my cup of tea.
    So yeah, don't be sorry for writing one of the best chapters so far.
    Be proud of it. Both of you.
    & now, let's link it.
    :mrgreen:

    Thanks for the ded, btw :}
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:27am
  • Billie Joe_Malfoy

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    It never fails. I always love every chapter. That one really had everything. I wish you guys updated more. This is one of my favorites.
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:04am
  • ohhaielise

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    This chapter blew me fucking AWAY.
    I WANT YOUR WRITING SKILLUZ.

    please write more soon!
    January 5th, 2008 at 06:56am
  • M.P.A.

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    dude!! it was fantastic!! I really love how you dudes write with so much description, I envy your talents.

    just got a bit of typos--skim the chapter and you'll see what I'm talking about. :]

    mroe soon?
    xoxo
    January 5th, 2008 at 05:33am
  • Bad Luck.

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    O_O Uh oh. Does that mean they won't get back to the bus?

    "How dare you turn every-fucking-thing on me!" I wanted to slap him right across his cheek. "You have no fucking idea how hard to it to make people love us when I'm sick of this! I'm sick of the fucking stupid lyrics I wrote! I'm sick of thinking the crowd will tear me apart if I don't sing a line well! I'm sick of having to make everyone fucking happy when I'm not!" I screamed in front of him and the band members I thought were my brothers. "I'm sick of putting myself through pain just to sing! If you were so fucking upset about my performance why the fuck didn't you help me out?! Why didn't you go up and make the crowd scream through the whole show!"

    "That's your job!" John boomed.

    "I don't fucking see you getting up from behind the drums and making it easier for me either, John...So don't you fucking start!" I glared, throwing knives at him in my mind.


    Awww. They shouldn't fight, it's no one's fault! Awww. I hope nothing bad happens... like if they break up. No! Gah...

    "Ladies first," Frankie said, waiting for me to go in. My heart began to pound harder and harder. I don't want to go in there, I'd rather stay out here with the witches.

    "Nah, you can go first," I said, trying not to stutter my voice. I turned around and saw the other guys coming.

    "Okay, I'll be the lady if you really want," Frankie said, walking up the stairs and into the bus. "We have company!" I heard him say.


    Haha! Frank's the lady. That kind of made me laugh. But why was she so scared to go nto the bus? Pshh. Gerard's just an idiot. She shouldn'e be scared just to go on his bus, right?

    And haha, when Del totally just takes control of him in the washroom... like hell yeah! Totally pwned, Gerard. You go, Del.

    "Oh fuck, oh fuck, oh fuck!" he hissed with panic.

    "Come one, fucking open!" I tried tearing at the lock, but it was stuck. I was locked inside the cubical with him while they were looking for him. The blame was starting to creep into my mind. I turned to him as slow as I could. "It just won't open..."


    So what does it mean? Are they going to get back to the bus on time? Will everyone discover them? GAAHHH. Damn cliffhanger! Disgust

    I need questions answered, dammittt... I can't wait for another update!

    Oh, and PS... This did not suck!
    January 5th, 2008 at 03:52am
  • Break Me Down x3

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    gah, I'm so sorry this chapter sucked guys! :cheese:
    Sucked?
    It was fucking amazing!!!
    It made my day!!!
    This is my al time favorite story anywhere!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    January 5th, 2008 at 03:29am
  • Alice Verney

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    that sucks that they are stuck in a stall
    January 5th, 2008 at 01:30am
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    gah, I'm so sorry this chapter sucked guys! :cheese:
    January 5th, 2008 at 12:16am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I love it, very good chapter.
    Out of interest, are the cubicles walls from ceiling to floor 'cos otherwise you can get under or over them. Same with the door. Done that waaay too many times to be caught out like that. Or, you could try turning the lock the other way. Whatever you do, don't panic.
    more more more!!
    January 4th, 2008 at 11:52pm
  • jetblackhotelmirror

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    it was a really great update--the word 'finish' scared me tho so i had to check the comments!

    but yea it kept me reading-and ill be late for work now-no joke haha
    thankya for updating, baaabe ( :P )
    <X3
    January 4th, 2008 at 11:21pm
  • Kerplunk Girl

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    Gah...I'm really nerous about what you guys will think of this chapter. I really hope I didn't ruin it. T_T
    January 4th, 2008 at 11:05pm