Words I Might Have Ate - Comments

awesome sauce!!!!
I say update friday. I can't wait!!

Now what's this about foreshadowing? Omg I'm clueless as to what's going to happen.. I just know I'm going to like it xD

Update Friday... please?

Mibba is telling me I need to write a meaningful comment... so... uh... "Rock 'n' Roll is an attitude, it's not a musical form of a strict sort. It's a way of doing things, of approaching things. Writing can be rock 'n' roll, or a movie can be rock 'n' roll. It's a way you live your life."

May that guide your hand.

I like how... nonchalant he is about being torn between the girls. It's almost like he doesn't realize he like Rilla to an extent -- is that what you were aiming for?

Please don't think I've stopped reading! I've been away from Mibba and now I'm catching up on all your updates. They're all fantastic, by the way. I love the suspense the boys are feeling with the recording contract. I can feel how badly they want it.

Keep up the amazing work.

Aww!
Yay! Billie so has a major crush on Rilla!!!!

Awww Rilla is seriously too sweet in this chapter! And so is Billie Joe!!
lol I'm awake till about 5 am every night, so this was perfect timing xDD

The song "Orphan Boy" on this profile reminds me of Bill in this story for some reason. http://www.myspace.com/pinchegringoband

Also the big thing between Abigail and Rilla reminds me of this play a kid in my acting class did a monologue from. A line I kind of really remember and that I feel applies to this goes something like "Girls don't go for nice cause they think its boring, lacking depth. But, I'll tell you right now there's another kind of nice, a hard nice that says 'Fuck you,' to the hog riding assholes. 'I'm going to exemplify hope and reason and compassion!' So go fuck one of the four horsemen if you want; I'm nice!" I could see Rilla saying something like that if pushed (reworded a bit of course).
Anyway that's my analysis and maybe it's not what you had in mind, but that's what happens to art. Everyone distorts what you really mean, lol.

Great job on this latest chapter.I'm glad Bill went after her and vice versa -- drives me nuts when they don't. I like your descriptions and humor -- I'm actually learning some stuff from ya. Can't wait for the next chapter! They're making summer school easier... and yet harder since I'm neglecting homework. =P

I was in the chapter! Yay! I love you even more right now if its even possible.
And you know what really REALLY made me laugh?

"Are you sure they aren't hiding because they saw your face?"

That sentence seriously made me crack up. I love you. :)

Love it :)

YAY! Rilla FTW!!!

Wooooo GO RILLA!!!

ahem- now that that's out of the way- I'm proud of you following your updating schedule too!! But I need more story soon!!

That bitch Abigail told them I bet! I dislike her lots and lots!!!!!! I'm super excited that the girls said yes to hanging out with them! I guess we'll figure out how that goes next Sunday eh? Can't wait til then! <3

“Just do what you normally do at shows, Tré—creep on underage girls and do cocaine off the toilet seats in the bathroom.”

That was perfect. Definitely had me cracking up.

But holy hell woman!!! That chapter was soo friggin inense! Did Abigail sell them out?!! She knew about it! And then she left!! OMG please tell me she did so I can despise her lmfao
But seriously- to end it like that?! You're damn right I'll see you on Thursday!

lol but really- nothing but love <3 Can't wait!

Rilla FTW!!

“I’m not trying to tell you anything,” Mike answers calmly and I turn a bit in my seat so I can look at him as he speaks. “I’m flat out telling you that if you were getting mugged, I would be running in the opposite direction as fast as I can go. So no, I would not save you.”

Tré gasps indignantly, covering his mouth with one hand. “But Mikey,” He stammers, blinking rapidly as if he were keeping his tears at bay. “Mikey, I love you—I would literally stop a speeding bullet for you!” He hits the Pinto’s steering wheel for emphasis and the entire dashboard shudders horrifically

ROFL!!

I just wanted to say just read this story (I'm new to mibba) and love it! Great idea with an original take!

Hey there!

So I absolutely adored this chapter. BUT!!!! I want Billie to end up with Rilla. Please????

:)

I found this yesterday and I believe that this is one of the best BJA stories that I've read in a good long while ^_^ Cant wait to read the next update!!! <3

I loved it as always.
The fact that Abigail ditched him pisses me off. Like, I'm really curious if she did it out of annoyance or just 'cuz they were celebrating and she didn't want to impose. I want her to be a little bitchier... you know, so I can dislike her. But they're just too evenly matched right now.

(I still want Rilla though.)
xD

...RANDOM...:

...Abigail's character isn't on your character page lol
I just noticed that bc I was looking to see what Rilla looked like again and Abigail wasn't there..

Rilla! If Billie ends up with Abigail it will annoy the living shit out of me...Just sayin'....Thought I'd throw that out there...It's already eating away at me that he's spending so much time with Abigail and hasn't bumped into Rilla again...

i love this story-mondays and fridays!