Words I Might Have Ate - Comments

"Mike shrugs, looking indifferent. “It was alright—I mean it had its moments of awesome, but I don’t see it being really popular anytime soon. Anyway, you in?”"

Ha. Ha ha. Hahahahaha!!

oh just kididng i found it hahaha <3

oh just kididng i found it hahaha <3

this story was so amazing i cant even describe to you how beautiful your writing is! you have some major talent! this story made me fan girl and cry tbh. but anyways I love Billie's POV. I honestly feel like you nailed it with the way he think. So i vote for his POV in the sequel! do you mind telling me what the name of the sequel is and where i can find it?(: thanks! <3

ok. first: How can i be gone for a little and you end the story??? ahh!! And i didnt notice!!!
BUT I have to say the last two chapter tht i just read with the laptop in my bed and a big big amazig coffee, were just amazing!!!! I loved them!!! I love Rilla and Billie in your story!

o, the sequel.. write it in Rilla's POV, or in both. I lovelovelove the name fingerprints but Requiem is amazing too. cant wait to read the sequel!! I love you!!!

Oh and thanks for an awesome story!

Oh how beautiful!! I'm sorry it took me so long to comment. If you want the truth, I started reading the chapter the day you posted it, but I was so distracted, I stopped. I just had to give it a fair read, ya know? And I'm so glad I did!!! LOVED IT.
As far as POV's- I'd honestly like it from either. I'm a sucker for things written from Billie's POV, but I like Rilla enough to where I'd like hers too ;)
Same goes for the title. Thought I don't rightly 'get' "Requiem," it makes me more interested. Just 'cuz I'm not really sure what to expect from it... So, yah :D

I'll go subscribe!!!
<3

I'd like to get more into Rilla's mind on the next one. Like let that be her story for the most part. It'd be an interesting dynamic and would really give the two stories more of their own identities. Requiem always makes me feel sad mostly because of the ultimate D.A.R.E. add of a movie, but if that's what chure feelin' do it! I really dug that you gave her some sanity upon hearing the news about the kiss. I hate when author's over do the reactions. 10 points to Ravenclaw.

oh my gosh that was just about the damn cutest thing Ive ever read. I loved all the stumbling of words and how he was okay being honest with her...almost completely.
I can not wait for the sequel and Requiem sounds PERFECT. *subscribes and waits eagerly*
I think Rillas POV would be cool, with BJ thrown in every once in a while like this one.

I like Fingerprints.
And Billie's pov.
But I'm an oddball and it's your story, so do what you like best.
Go for it! (:

Are we going to do this? Are we going to fucking do this? Cause I take that chapter as a CHALLENGE, man. A challenge to a cute off. I still can't wipe the dumb grin off my face, that was adorable.

I can't wait to read about the havoc that is on its way thanks to Abigail. Are you still thinking about using that monologue I showed you way back when? Just wondering. No pressure. I'm kind of wondering if that parting kiss is going come back to haunt everybody.

The bus part was very like Casablanca old school "Cry not for me sweet, Charlotte!" I liked it.

Yay it was awesome!!!!
So like... is that the end of this one???? Make sure to tell me when the new one is up then preeeease :D

I love you :D

Aww.
Yikes, Abigail is too cocky for her own good.
Yay sequel!!
Where in Cali?
Is it awesome?
LOL

Cute :)

okay so I have to admit, when she said shed be around to satisfy needs rilla couldnt meet...I flipped off my computer screen. lame? yes. but it needed to be done.
I hate the fact that I know shes not going to go away and it makes me anxious(in a bad way) that shell be around again :/ I dont want her to ruin anything like I suspect she willllll. fuck sluts ha.
anyway, the happy part is I love Billie and Rilla with all the cuteness and smiles. I can hear Tre and Mikes conversation outside the studio.It fits em to a T.
love it and can not wait to see what you post next.

:) :) I've been checking in on mibba, and checking and checking and no updates. So I was quite happy when I found 5 new (super duper awesome) updates waiting to be read ^.^ And they were super duper freakin awesome. They kissed!! I did a mini happy dance while reading that part.. I hope that isn't weird... :P Aaaanyways, I'll be waiting for the next super duper awesome update (which will be coming soon, I hope) :D And also.. this Abigail woman.. not a big fan of hers. I have a feeling I'm gonna have to somehow get myself into this story with a baseball bat in hand to sort out that problem.. But she makes things interesting, I'll give her that :P Please please please update as soon as possible :) :) please :)

ok so I found this story two days ago and have spent any free time I had reading to catch up.
I absolutely love it! The way you write Billie is hilarious and Rilla is like me only a lot less music smart and a lot more book smart hah
I love love love how detailed you make everything and how you just didnt drop them in right away...I have a tendency to quit reading if things happen right off the bat, you build it all up PERFECTLY.
first of all definately yes to the sequel! I love it when stories are continued.
But I seriously hate that abigail girl. I dont know if its because we never fully get any info on her or just because shes a flat out bitch!! But im totally hoping these two decide to be an item :)

anyways. update soon I hope, Im in love with this story

Hello?

-knocks on computer screen-

Where are you??

oooo HOW CUTE!
I love Rilla. She's great.
... but when is Abigail coming back? I know she'll make a dreadful appearance soon... and tbh- Billie best keep it in his pants.

Wow, 4000 words, that really is a lot. I'm glad you always make the effort to write a long chapter though, because whenever I read your story i go get a hot coffee or a hot chocolate, a cookie and then let myself drown in your writing... f that makes any sense?

Anyway.. I LOVED the chapter. The two of them are the most adorable people I've ever read about (wow... i was just about to write 'that I've ever met', haha).
I also love those little every-day things that you include in your story; like Billie counting the stairs or him sniffing at a glass to make sure its clean -- that made me smile!
Ich liebe dich auch!