January 14th, 2010 at 06:45am
Words I Might Have Ate - Comments
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Dude, I just started reading this today and I just couldn't stop. Your writing is amazing, really orginal. It just sounds intelligent. I love it. Don't stop!January 8th, 2010 at 03:08am
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i just LOVED the chapter. Billie's just awesome. Let's hope Rilla stops by more often now!
I'm not entirely sure, but i think “He irritated me at first, but I think I’m starting to like him.” is a Billie-quote. If not, then the word "Alright" definitely is!!!!December 21st, 2009 at 03:43pm -
Great so far *Subscribes* more soon!December 17th, 2009 at 11:51am
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ok so as I was reading the first bit, in which they arrange the furniture and all in Rillas dorm, I was wondering, do you live in a dorm, too? Is it right at the campus? I thinkt that must be so cool. We dont have dorms in Germany and it sucks!! People always need to get appartments when they go to college. IT SUCKS!!!
and, by the way, i CANTTTT wait for Billie and Rilla to meet. :) Great chapter. loved ittt :)November 19th, 2009 at 07:41pm -
Great job on the Rilla chapter. I'm excited for her and Billie to meet.November 17th, 2009 at 12:54am
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You said something in GERMANNNNN!!!!
I love you now even more, haha.
I can totally understand your school situation, school takes up SO FREAKING MUCH of my time, it's not even funny anymore.... then again, it never really was.
I totally LOVED the chapter, I loved Billie's 'it's spelt differently'-answer so much, it made me laugh. Cant wait fot the next part, especially because our beloved boy will meet our beloved girl.November 14th, 2009 at 10:35pm -
Haha, that test question and Billie's answer cracked me up. I love this story.November 11th, 2009 at 05:43am
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finally get around to reading it....i feel like billie, i'm a shit procrastonator.October 25th, 2009 at 05:19am
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ahahahahhahahah!!!!!!
“I see a couple of familiar faces though.”
“I don’t.”
Hehe, and I loved how Billie frantically looked around when he heard Mike saying Abigail was there.... haha!!! I love you girl!! You're awesome! And I dont even know if 'frantically' was the right word to use... I just did. I dont care :)October 7th, 2009 at 12:45pm -
Loved it. I love how everything has so much detail :]
Keep it coming.October 6th, 2009 at 05:58am -
Wow. This is the most thought out, logical story I've ever read online. Even with mibba's anal rules, I usually get sucked into reading exceedingly lame, overdone, poorly constucted stories, so you can imagine my shock when I stumbled across a competent writer. I honestly can't believe that this doesn't have 10 stars.
Thanks,
JennOctober 6th, 2009 at 02:48am -
Great Story :)October 6th, 2009 at 12:39am
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"Tell me more, tell me more! Did she put up a fight?"
I love this story. It's wonderful. UPDATE NOW!October 5th, 2009 at 06:04am -
Yes another chapter! :DOctober 2nd, 2009 at 11:03pm
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ahaha. i loved billie's reply. :)October 1st, 2009 at 06:07pm
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I love this story, just everything about it just feels so real <3October 1st, 2009 at 10:49am
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I feel the same way, i'm putting off my salon project right now. I kinda wanna read catcher in the rye. I heard it's really good.September 20th, 2009 at 12:31am
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I'm so glad Mibba worked for my stupid internet and I just caught up on the lat two chapter.
LOVED IT!!
I cant wait for them to meet (:September 15th, 2009 at 03:49pm -
I was randomly searching through the story list for a good Green Day story to read before bed, and I was more than thrilled when I came across this one! You have a very nice writing style; very professional and neat. And I was immediately hooked after reading the first few paragraphs. You have Billie Joe's personality down perfectly, and the way you envisioned his life as a younger adult really is amazing and realistic.
You have also portrayed Mike and Tre's persona's wonderfully as well! Mike is the more sensible one while Tre is a little on the crazy side. Everything fits, and I love how clean everything looks: your paragraphing, grammar, spelling, and even the layout is nice. It isn't contrasting horribly with the text like some stories are. I really hate having to resort to the default layout whenever someone uses ridiculous colors and fonts.
I also love how you've created Rilla to act. She's not in a very similar position to Billie in any way (that I can tell so far, anyways--I don't want to jump to conclusions), but at the same time, you can kind of sense the familiarity between the two, mainly because of Faye and Andy and how much they remind me of Mike and Tre, though we haven't gotten to see much of Andy. Hopefully we will? She sounds like such an interesting character! :tehe:
I'm really looking forward to the rest of this! I'm definitely subscribing. Finding this story was like a breath of fresh air, and I have a feeling that this is going to be one of my favorite Billie Joe stories. The originality and over all wonderful writing that this story possesses is easily proving to me that this story has potential. Can't wait for more; fantastic job so far! (:
Edit; Oh wow. I didn't mean to write you a biography. :XDAugust 31st, 2009 at 06:31am
I'm subscribed :]