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I'm not sure why, entirely, but this line made me want to cry:

"Thursday during lunch, Sarlanda and Ophilia went into an all-out duel against a bunch of Slytherins who were trying to hex her for standing up to Umbridge."

PS- I'm back ;]

..... i think it was better without the rewrite.
Its still really great tho.

Last one for the last chapter- "reveal" not "revile" <3 I stayed up ALL NIGHT finishing this! I got so addicted... again!

Last one for the last chapter- "reveal" not "revile" <3 I stayed up ALL NIGHT finishing this! I got so addicted... again!

Cornelius fudge is an ass isn't available on youtube!

Stacey is so cute. Out of everything, Purebloods screaming insults by far had me laughing the hardest.

At least Jennifer got smart! "I had to stop using that nickname. I knew I was sure to screw up and call her that to her face." Ohhhh. So like her father. I miss James!!! Actually, he probably wouldn't have made that realization. He'd probably just do it and get detention XD

AAAAHAHAHAHA 18 is definitely one of my absolute favorite chapters. It would have been better if there were a rule that made the Prefect's bathrooms password only changeable once a month. =]

In chapter 13, it's established that Lance tried to use an Unforgivable Curse on Cedric, and Cedric left Jennifer alone with him to dance? WHATTTTTT. And when it said "fluffy security", I thought of- you know, Fluffy. Fluffy security. XD

Still doing edits, or did you never change the status? In case you are, here are a couple options for chapter 5:

sposed
un-expected
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35- aww you should have had the knights sing stuff like "The toad queen always wears puke pink, she dosen't use her brain to think!" and hahaha Dumbledore is awesome
43- "Oh my god, you look like a frog," LMFAO!!!
46-ahahahaha carrots- Ophilia, you are so cut
I looove Sarlanda, I think she must be my favorite too!!! I feel like Jen could have been better, if you let her. Damn it took you three years to finish this?! I better get on mine -_- And...I feel like if I were a character, I would be fighting Death Eaters then pause to stare at Lance and say "that kid needs some serious mental help...but he's so hot! :o" and get screamed at by someone. Yeah...

*Nudge-nudge*
I do say that I'm still loving the re-written chapters;]

waiting for the new re-made chapters! I think you deleted alot about lance though. I seem to remember you describing their relationship more... keep it up <3

Also, did you see Very Potter Sequel? It's totally awesome!!!

marry me? Please!!!

i found myself giggling at yet another AVPM reference (draco you little shit!!) you rock where have you been all my life?

oh my god!!! i just started reading this and i'm only on chapter 10 but i died of laughter at the "such a spare" part!!!! and once i stopped laughing, i shouted to jen "kill the spare!!" oh my god i love you!!! (great story btw)

The rest of the chapters are as great as ever:] But I think the best has yet to come...

Oh god... There's too many awesome chapters to continue this way now... *heads-desk*
I'll just give an over-all thing for the next ones k?