Lah lah lah, I feel like I shouldn't be saying this, cause all the shit that went down for Jen, but, I likeeeed this chappy. Hahaha, I'd go into detail about what parts I liked and such, but I'm half a sleep at my laptop, so I'll just start saying how much I love this: Just... wow. I mean, these last chapters are unravelling everything, ya know? It's almost like rereading the HP 5th book, lol. And, I just like how into detail you can get with the description-- "his face contorted… the room glittered" instead of "he looked mad, the room was pretty" ya know? It just adds to the awesomeness of the story. :D and and and? Lol sorry, like I said, I'm dying here. Lol.
But but but, I'm soooo happy that you'll be spoiling us on updates! I mean, I need some spoiling, here. Lolololol. :D
Gosh, I'm sorry for... hahaha, I don't even know, rambling on and on? Making no sense? Lol.
But all in all, liked the update, can't wait for the next ones! :)
And now, I'm off, before I go psychoer than I already am. :D
gosh girl, you should feel happy about this: It's like... 3:30 AM over here, and because of the awesomeness that inhabits me, I will comment on this story at said time. Lolololol, don't mind me, I'm just being a smart ass. :D
Anyway, awesome updates! (I say 'S', because I haven't logged into here in a while, so I got to read two chapters for this story!) It never fails to amaze me how much discription or explaination you can put into the story-- it makes it a hell of a lot easier for lots of readers, and in turn, it makes you a really good author. hmmm... I don't remember what else I was going to say. Lol. But in short, your doing great! Awesomely! Fabuloso! Lol. Keep up the awesomeness!
WELL, that was certainly an interesting read! Excellent pranks, I must say, very nice. The mood of the story's changed quite a bit too, but that could be considered good or bad according to the preference of the reader. I am VERY confused about that bit with Brittney. When did that happen? And are the Marauders just the three girls, or does it include Sirius's kid too?? It's very fast-paced so therefore can also be quite confusing. You based a lot off of the books, which is neither good nor bad in my opinion, which makes me re-reading the Order Of The Phoenix quite pointless now. =/ Anyhow, do read my stories when you have time...message me, all that. =]