A new light - Comments

I just found this story its freaking awesome, and I want more....but sadly it hasn't updated in three years...my luck and timing sucks I guess...Thank you for I have gotten to read...

well for one i'm pissed at my phone for not letting me know that i had this alert, i only found out when i got home late , the phone nearly met the wall because of this little accident :P Wonderful chapter as always, i love how lost they are in each and how consuming their relationship for each other is!! very Unf chapter and can't wait for the next!! XD

To be terribly honest, I had kinda forgotten about this story. Then when I got the update notice, I thought "what story is this?". When I realized it was this one, I squeaked. <3

The noise that came out of my mouth when i saw the update pop up in the corner of screen was so freaking unnatural, i swear i did a happy dance lol. Loved the chapter!! I loved Raven and Ville's sex conversation, i love how blunt she is with her brother reminding him that she is in fact grown and having sex is a normal progression of a relationship. It made me laugh. Great Chapter hun! And will willingly and avidly wait however long for the next one XD

Uh.......I FREAKING love this story. I have enjoyed it quite immensely. :-) I don't think it should ever end.....;) haha but all good things must I guess....I think they should get pregnant and be married! :-) I really love this story. Can't wait to see how you finish it out. <3

I have no clue how you could possibly end it. Liked the update, as you already know. Just go out with a bang, is all I can say. I expect great things.....

Bam &Co. as they calls them should visit i dont know whyyyy but today i feel like ruining good moments LoL

wonderful, wonderful wonderful thing for me to wake up to this morning!!!! loved it! I loved the texts between Raven and Jyrki, that teasing banter, along with that quiet moment at her apartment. I think one suggestion for your story, would be getting those awkward conversations between Ville and Raven, along with Ville and Jyrki out of the way. lol. I mean...it's one thing for Ville to know and acknowledge that his sister and friends have feelings for another, has to be another completely to him to actually "witness" them :P Great chapter! And can't wait for more...though i will, ever so patiently :P

-Kassandra

I finally caught up with this story (was the first Jyrki one I found here) and it has to be one of my favorite fics I've EVER read! It's almost impossible to find a Jyrki fic in the internet (just a small handful here, almost none elsewhere).

I finally write this review with all my finger intact :P though i didn't play with fireworks this year...maybe next :D Loved the chapter as always, i love how Jyrki conveniently forgets to warn raven in time just to see her run around :P I can't wait to see Raven and Ville's convo, because even though he lets her live her own life, that convo has got to be awkward as hell!!! Hope you get over the block (as i'm suffering from it a bit as well and it sucks the big one) and can't wait for the next!

-Kassandra

Cute cute cute update :)

I really liked that chapter, actually lol. But if you feel it's right to end this story soon, then I'll deal wth it. It's a very good story and I'm sure you'll go out with a bang.
As always, I loved it and I really can't wait for the next chapter, even if it is a while.

LOL! That was brilliant! Truly, it was :D

'Oh my god!" was all i kept repeating over and over as i read this chapter! Excellent lol. This was definitely a great thing to come home while i took my lunch break!! Wonderful wonderful chapter, i not only love Jyrki and Ravens morning banter but i love Ville's reaction!!! Can't wait for the next!n
-Kassandra

love your update
can't wait for more

Lol, poor Ville, poor Jyrki and poor Raven. I feel bad for them but that scene cracked me up :D

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Jussi is such a shit! Poor Ville, that would be a bit much to see, haha.
So well written, really loved it! More soon???? <3

Oh that was an epic chapter! Full of laughs - very enjoyable to read! :)
It was just so perfectly written I don't even know what else to say lol. Very well done chapter.
Looking forward tons to the next chapter. Hope you can keep up the good work and continue to surprise me. Sorry the comment isn't that long - there isn't much to say!

Up to par? Definitely. Loved it. You wrote it beautifully, including everything while still keeping it romantic and not making me feel.... bad(? Not the best word, but I can't think of anything else right now, I'm way tired) for reading it.
Also, seeing stuff from Jyrki's POV was nice too. I kind of thought that was how he viewed things, but it was good to get that reassurance. Was also cool to see him being dominated, so to speak, at some points lol. As others have already said.
As always, awesome writing and I can't wait for the next one.

well written scene, there's no doubt about it. loved it :D