A new light - Comments

Finally! lol! loved the scene! What i loved the most was how the first half was definitely up to the pace of their teasing while afterwards, that slowness, totally fits, them, and i still love their fight for dominance, and i think Jyrki losing control. def a fav. moment of mine XD As always, Love love love! and I'm so glad your doctor was skilled and your mouth is feeling better!!

Can't wait for the next!

-Kassandra

Yes, you wrote the ending to that night perfectly! I can totally picture Jyrki's smug smile after that, haha. Glad you're mouth was treated well and you have lots of painkillers :D
Can't wait for the next update, and I hate it when you think something's great and then you write it and other people dont get it :/
Hope it translates okay in the next chapter <3

You've written this so well but since it's been stretched out over a few chapters it's harder to get back into... cannot wait for the next update though. Hope you'll not be in too much pain from your wisdom teeth <3

That was a nice chapter. I never ever would have guessed that getting your hair washed could be so romantic! But you turned that average thing into something special, which was awesome. Very nicely done.
The teasing is so drawn out though, and like a previous comment said, it might have been better (and more effective) if you had just lengthened the chapters instead of really drawing it out. I guess, for me, just reading it in chunks like this is kinda making it hard to get back into the scene and continue following it. If you understand what I mean?
And I'm confused to why he says "Don't regret...." at the end? Don't regret what?
I hope your mouth isn't too sore. :(
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. You're a good writer :)

I'm pretty sure the people that are surrounding me in the campus cafeteria are wondering why the hell i'm grinning so damn much....its because the wonderful chapter and the prospect of the end of the teasing lol! Wonderful chapter, i love how you turned Jyrki washing her hair into something sexy and romantic(one can only hope my Jyrki ends up even a smidgen likes yours)

Can't wait for the next, and hope your mouth feels better quick!! XD(Thats my way of sympathizing for the wisdom teeth removal)

Kassandra

haha, Jyrki's evil! Teasing that much is just mean!!! Cannot wait for more updates, this is so well written but if I were her I would be taking back control lol

this is a never ending (scene)! i love it, it's hot, but damn woman! haha. it's truly goood, don't get me wrong, but maybe it would be better to make make chapters longer to facilitate the mood/character interaction/etc rather then making back to back lead ups... i admire the goal you have for this (scene) but putting them together a bit more so could help it flow better

Gah dude! Evil!! lol. Amazing chapter one again, and i totally know what you mean about these types of scenes being hard to write, it takes me forever to get scenes like this out, so i totally understand with wanting to try something new....even if it is frustrating :P Once again amazing chapter, not boring at all!LOVE!

-Kassandra

Absolutely loved it lol. And just for the record, I am not bored whatsoever with this scene. I can't believe it frustrates you writing it though. To me, it seemed like you had written many of these types of scenes before and were totally comfortable with it and experienced and what not lol becuase you did such a good job. You're writing was beautiful. Absolutely beautifully romantic.
I loved the line about his leather pants too lol ;)
I don't really know what else to say. The whole thing just seemed perfect, really lol. You did a great job and are a great writer. I really hope to be reading more soon :) keep up the good work!

love it

That was down right evil, you made Jyrki one hell of a tease! can't wait to the next update <3

You're a horrid tease, do you know that? <3

Did I like that chapter? Pft. Like is not the word I would use lol more like love! :D
It was a very well written chapter and I hate how you just left us there lol so that means you have to update soon to finish it off for us! :) It was such a romantic scene, and I want more lol
Good job, please post more soon! :)

Loved the update! I can't wait for the next one!!!

i really like the way you write jyrki. he is such a strong character and this chapter really showed that. the romanticism of it all was great. i can even appreciate how you ended the chapter. well played, my friend :)

dude!! this is war! XD that was horribly mean and as i saw the scroll bar getting closer and closer to the end i was like...'damnmit!' Great chapter, great ending lol. You've left me pouting i have to tell you! I love how they both are able to let the other have control and it switch and have it be so easy for them, wonderful!

Can not wait for the next chapter XD

-Kassandra

Lol love it. It was brilliant :)

haha, I bet she's going straight to bed! XD
Excellent update, poor Jyrki, that amount of teasing could kill a guy! lol, hope you update again very soon <3

Oh that was a great update! :)
I love how she gets all flirty and naughty with him and I dunno what you're gonna do next chapter. Will they go all the way? Or will they settle for less? Is Jyrki going to be a sweet romantic about it? Or is he going to be a typical rock star? Etc.
I have no clue what's gonna happen. You have to update soon. And I mean soon! I'm sure we're all dying for another chapter!

Everything really seemed to just work out perfectly in the chapter to her advantage. And your writing is still high quality, so keep up the good work.
You're probably sick of me saying this by now (I'm sure I say it at the end of every comment!), but you did a really good job and I liked it a lot so please update soon! I can't wait for more! :)

and I'm the frustrating one? lol. Great great great update per usual, love how mige and Gas' play fighting ended up coming to Raven's beneifit XD what i think i love the most is the fact that thier both excusing themselves from their groups, but mostly love taht Raven still keeps her brother in mind by tellng him she's just off to bed, instead of admitting that she's leaving with jyrki lol. Loved it! and cna't wait for more!!

-Kassandra