Oooh, you horrid tease !! I thought they were finally going to get down to it, and then you go ahead and give Raven the curse of common sense ! Brilliant update though, I loved it !
The "No glove, no love!" was epic! :D Lol But boy oh boy is she a tease! It's great to see more of her personality coming out. I thought it was a more relaxed and a funny, entertaining chapter, which was cool and great fun to read. As always, I liked it, and update soon please :)
Dude, doing that to Jyrki is just mean, and genius :P I love Mige's call of 'no glove no love' and i also love how jussi starts looking at them noticing something is up in the dressing room lol. Great update, as always and i can't wait for more!!
As always, I loved the update :) I didn't find it boring at all. It was simple, but you pulled it off. I can't wait for the concert in the next chapter, and for whenever she's going to be wearing her new items for Jyki..... Lol If we ever get a scene of that, that is. So yeah, good work with the new chapter, and I can't wait to find out what happens at the concert, considering Ville will be there too. I'm thinking he might spice things up and maybe create a little drama.... But we'll see. Update soon, please! :)
LOVED IT! lol, loved how her voice gets deeper when talking to Jyrki and i def love how Jyrki sarts thinking when she reveals what she bought with the voucher he gave her. Wonderful chapter and i can't wait for the concert XD
I didn't get to read this yesterday coz I was busy with my birthday stuff which sucked but can I pretend it's a birthday thing for me too? lol... wonderful chapter and I loved how she reacted to BAm and Novak, poor Ryan seemed quiet... more soon?? <3
Great update. I loved her meeting Bam and the gang and thinking that they were so noisy. I can only imagine what that would have been like lol. But she kept her cool and Jyrki was always there for her, which was sweet. Kinda got a feeling that Bam will add some drama to the story, but who knows.....
Also, when there are people who don't speak Finnish in the chapter, could you maybe add in when Ville, Jyrki and Raven are speaking Finnish and when they're speaking English? I just think it would kinda clear things up a little bit in the conversations. As always, I really enjoyed reading the chapter and I hope to see another update soon :) You're doing an excellent job of this story.
i feel INCREDIBLY special right now! Best b-day present Evvveeeerrr!!! lol.
Great chapter as always, i have to say you hae Novak and Bam right on with thier loudness, i can only see Raven getting exasperated with them as the night goes on lol.
What i love also is though you see very little of jyrki, there are still those moments where hes very obviously there, like him noticing that she's wincing with the level of volume Bam and Novak use and just squeezing her knee to comfort her.
really great chapter, and can't wait for more...as always :p