Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

Best ever absolutely fucking loved it even if I missed a full smutt story ;) awesome awesome job

Love this!

Awww, such a sweet ending to an adorable story! I agree with Cat too with the whole shift in power in "Mean Girls." Ahhh, so good.

I love it!!!

Oh, wow. I can honestly say that I didn't see that coming with Laney being the one who put Sarah's name into the running. Even though now it seems kind of obvious haha. But it was so awesome how Zack stood up for Sarah in front of the whole school and Stephanie stood up to Laney. It kind of reminded me of the ending for Mean Girls where the position of power in 'girl world' is changed.

I loved the ending where he finally confessed his feelings to her! It honestly makes me want to know what happens next, like I was thinking of what the characters would be like once they go away to college because I have a feeling that Sarah might be a changed person. Idea for a sequel perhaps? Haha! Even though I know you struggled to complete this story, but it's just a thought. ;) I think it could be interesting.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I wanna give Sarah a big hug :D
She's so lucky!
Best story ever ;D

aww that ending was super cute~ i loved this story hehe

Beautiful ending....loved it all. <3

the most adorable ending!
sad to see this go! but i loved every minute of it1!

:O

Great chapter!!! Please update soon

Aaargh! I wanna know what happens! Damn those cliffhangers!! =DD

You're killing me smalls!! Lol

I can't wait for next chapter!!

Why?? Why would you do that?? Why let Zacky get as far as "Sarah...I..."?? What he should do is just grab her and kiss the very life out of her =D
Loved it!! x

She had better win... : )

ohhhh this is gonna be good!

Awwwwww!
Something bad is about to happen tho. :(

I agree with the others about how the dress matched the colour of his eyes, that's adorable! Although, Laney saying anything worries me.

loved it!
loved that her dressed matched his eyes! so cute!