Soul Salvation - Comments

Haha, I agree with Cat so much about Brian lecturing her... it was really cute! I really hope that she can help him find some closure about his death.

It was so adorable when Brian was basically lecturing Rania about not falling behind in her studies. He sounds like such a dad when he does that. XD Hopefully she can find something - anything - about his death and get to the bottom of it quick smart!

Yup, definitely still want to give Brian the biggest hug I can muster =D
Loved it ducky!! x

You're killing me with the heartache he feels. It's so real and so beautiful, I hope he gets some closure.

I literally lawled when I read the part about Brian materializing in his favourite spot, the swiveling computer chair. XD And when he casually just walked past Amrita without her even noticing him when they left the house.

I was all aaaawwwww when he was visiting the grave and talking about maybe there not being anything on the other side for him and being a ghost was like still being alive. I hope that there's a happy ending and not a sad depressing one. XD

love this so far

This story makes me just ache for Brian and tears at my heartstrings. I loved that flashback sequence, very well-written.

It was so funny that Brian was spinning around on the chair like a little kid at the beginning of the chapter. XD It made him seem so boyish.

Aww his memory is a little fuzzy but at least he can remember some things, right? I hope he gets his memory back soon. Maybe he'll go some place that will jog his memory and he'll remember what happened? That's what I'm guessing.

Also, in the flashback you mentioned the name Kate when I think you were talking about Brian's son? I got a little confused at that part. XD

I genuinely want to give Brian a hug with every chapter of this story!!
Loved it!! x

Nyaw it was so cute the way that Brian tried to make himself known so that Rania wouldn't look like such a huge loser to her friends XD Especially when he sat down on the chair. That part had me cracking up for some reason. Then how he was so down about not being able to show himself, I just wanted to give him a big ol' hug!

Wonder what's going to happen to make her friends believe more.

I'm very much feeling the love for Brian in this story!! Mostly because I feel oh so sorry for the chap!! = )
Can't wait for more ducky!! LOVED IT!! x

Love the story, it's awesome. And it's also awesome that you updated!!!

YOU UPDATED??????? WHAT???????
I LOVE THIS STORY!
IT'S SO GREAT TO HAVE YOU BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

HELL YES I'M EXCITED BITCH! XD

Hmm... methinks Brian might have died on that staircase that Rani gets such a strange feeling walking up and down.

I loved the idea that Brian can't remember how he died. That one minute he was alive and the next he wasn't. It's entirely how I imagine dying might be like. I thought it was interesting.

Poor ghostly Brian = (
I love this story ducky!! Awesomeness on a page!! And I seriously can't wait for more!! x

I love this so much. It inspires me to write something like this.

“I didn’t follow you down,” he explained, his shimmery translucent form beginning to pace the floor.

That line was so captivating, you had me from start to finish. I'm addicted... which means I want more!

THIS...IS...THE...BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Can't wait to see what Brian does next! I wonder if he'll try and make himself known to Rania's parents? They can't deny there's no ghosts, then, haha.

He should go all poltergeist on them and start fling chairs across the room.
Surely, even if you don't believe in ghosts, you can't miss a flying chair?? = )

As always, I LOVED IT!!
Mhm. I have very much missed your writing = ) and finding that you'd updated twice was a great pick me up from my horrible day = (
So I thank you for that ducky!! x