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  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Psh, we all know Brian doesn't want her to leave, hahah
    XD : D
    August 23rd, 2009 at 09:03am
  • cynicalqueen

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    With the weight of the book sin her bag, the walk seemed all the more cumbersome. - i think you can figure it out. ;)
    both clattering on the floor as a strangled s cream left Rania's lips in that instant.
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    Annyway, Brian sounds like an angry crotchety old man, lol. And I love how Rania isn't really scared of him since she's talking to him even when he's basically threatening her. XD
    Haha, I agree! He just... he seems to be a grumpy old man in this story. And Rania is so fearless... I'd like to know how Brian actually died and why he wants her to leave.
    August 22nd, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    With the weight of the book sin her bag, the walk seemed all the more cumbersome. - i think you can figure it out. ;)
    both clattering on the floor as a strangled s cream left Rania's lips in that instant.
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    Annyway, Brian sounds like an angry crotchety old man, lol. And I love how Rania isn't really scared of him since she's talking to him even when he's basically threatening her. XD
    August 22nd, 2009 at 04:41pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Maybe I've just got my priorities screwed, but I'd be royally pissed if someone scared me and made me drop my ice cream. That is precious stuff that's now been wasted!! Tee hee.
    Loved the update ducky = )
    This story interests me to no end!! x
    August 22nd, 2009 at 01:21pm
  • Don't Call My Name

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    If I were Rania, I wouldve thrown the ice cream at Brian hahaha :)
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:27am
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    He hardcore needs to get over himself.
    Like, befriend her.
    She seems chill, and well, he should be lonely after like, seven years practically alone. He's like... an anti-social hermit. Kinda like an awkward teenage emo kid or something. XD
    Stop mourning Brian, lol.

    I love crazy update Saturdays :]
    August 22nd, 2009 at 06:20am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I wonder what's going to happen now that she knows it wasn't a dream. This is probably my favourite story you have going on right now, it's phenomenal. So excited for the next chapter!
    August 21st, 2009 at 02:04pm
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    One should never be confused if they think they've had a dream of Brian...they should embrace it ; )
    I loved the update ducky!!
    And I'm rather excited for tomorrow!! Eeep!! x
    August 21st, 2009 at 09:53am
  • Rocket Queen

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    Rania said, placing her hands o n the table. - space between on.
    "I just...I wanted t know what you saw...up at Haner Manor." - to instead of t.
    "Why didn’t you tell you lived in Haner Manor?" - us between tell and the second you?
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    Zomg you teeeease! XD
    Good thing you're updating again tomorrow because I can't wait to see what Rania does now that she knows her "dream" wasn't really a dream. :D Will she try and contact Brian herself? Who knows! 'cept you of course, haha. ;)
    August 21st, 2009 at 07:43am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    August 21st, 2009 at 07:18am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Loved the updates
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    August 18th, 2009 at 06:51pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    You should write stories like this more often, because you're so good with the details and capturing the protagonist's emotions. I thought it was hilarious too how she left Brian standing there to go back to sleep. Too funny... loved the updates, Mandy!
    August 16th, 2009 at 12:55pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Rania's eyes widened as the man standing before her almost seemed to flow in the light. -- glow instead of flow?
    If she wasn't mistaken she cold see the shape and outline of her bedroom door right through him. -- could instead of cold.
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    Haha, I love how she just went back to bed and left him standing there. I can almost imagine him thinking like, "Uhh.. wtf am I supposed to do now? This has never happened to me before!" XD

    You pretty much described perfectly what it would be like to encounter a ghost, the way Rani was scared at first then tried to imagine he wasn't real.
    August 15th, 2009 at 11:41pm
  • bamftastic;

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    Poor Brian. But he needs to get over himself. I mean, yeah, it sucks to be dead and not have your family, but I would embrace the idea of having people around me again. I'd hate being a lonely spirit.

    Awesome updates :]
    August 15th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Awwww...poor Brian.
    I don't know about anyone else, but I would be rather frustrated if I was a ghost and was left just standing there as the person I was talking to decided to just go to sleep.
    Loved the updates!! x
    August 15th, 2009 at 10:18am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Loved it
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    August 9th, 2009 at 12:59pm
  • RavagedYourBody

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    I absolutely love this story. I just caught on to it yesterday, but it is absolutely fabulous, dear. I look forward to the next update! Hopefully it's soon!
    August 9th, 2009 at 11:29am
  • bamftastic;

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    lol, something weird happened at my place last night again.
    And I thought of YOUR story when I saw it.
    Oh my. xD

    If my water just suddenly went ice cold I'd think my brother either flushed the toilet or something, or I'd get super freaked and run away from the shower.
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:28pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh my gosh, that was actually really creepy. I wonder what Brian's going to do next, haha!
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Awesomeness!! Not that I was expecting any less since I pretty much adore every story you've ever written =D
    Can't wait for more ducky!! x
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:40am
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