Hello Brooklyn - Comments

awww poor Jack. She thinks Jack is Alex. But Jack doesnt know that.

Nooooooo!
SHE KISSED JACK?

Maybe that's a good thing....?

Koala's aren't actually bears, they're marsupials, haha.
But I really like this story, really original :)

I usually won't admit it, but you guys totally got me.
I just started and finished the last update so far tonight, and I was like shocked when I read what Jack had told Zack.
I mean usually I always guess those types of things in movies etc, but you guys totally caught me off guard.
ANYWAY,
so I love this story so much!
very original :)

love the update :D

this is a fucking AWESOME story.

Wow. This story is amazing...I didn't expect the twist though...can't wait for more. (:

Though the first chapter was funny, her reaction wasn't really that realistic. And how she couldn't see him, but then she could. And she also went through him, but then again, he was able to pull a 'fuzzy' from her hair.

Second Chapter; I laughed my butt off when I read "I stopped watching Dragon Tales when I turned eight." I haven't watched that show in forever! Good stuff, man.

But yeah, I've only read those two chapters. Reading the rest now. ^_^

wow that was like wow

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please write more? :D
Keep up the good work!
Much Love
-Jaci

Okay. I haven't checked any of my subscriptions in like a month because the stupid internet was being...well, you know, stupid and my dad turned off the internet on my phone because i was "misusing it" (whatever) so it just magically started to function today and i sign on to read my favorite story and THIS happens!!!!!! SHE'S SCHIZOPHRENIC!! WHHAAAAATTTT!! I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS JUST BY SOME MIRACLE HE WAS COMING BACK TO LIFE!!!! BUT NOOOOOOO! YOU JUST HAD TO TWIST IT AROUND DIDN'T YOU?? .....But i still love it! :) UPDATE SOOONNNNN!!!

Speechless........

I just read the last three!!
That was insane and totally blind sided me!
What happens now? Is Jack going to help her?
Ahh! Update soon:)

this is so sad! ): keep updating! its really good!

awwwwww :'(
love the update :D

Amazing and unique story, you guys. Love it.

im still in shock that Alex was never there
love the update though and poor Jack :( i feel sad for him

I did not see any of this coming. haha.
I actually thought she was really seeing themm.
Dammit, i knew it you would twist it. lol. (:
I love the story thoughhh. <3

it makes me sad, but i refuse to stop.
keep going please:]

this twist in the story was absolutely amazing. I love this story and an update should probably come soon because I want MORE!
This is awesome. :)

Aaaaahhhhh, I wanna know what happens next! Love the twist, I never would've expected it!